There's a thread for tags already.. post on that thread, people will crit on there. Plus you started 2 threads with the exact same thing..

 

what jak24 said was right.

Anyways it needs some major work. Im not too good either, but i can still say it needs some major work done to it. To start connect the letters. Second throw in some style like underlines etc but before u even think about that, fix ur letters. Hope i helped bro.

 

Keep your letters the same height and width .

 

Dont start adding connections and stuff yet. Try to get your letters all straight, then get them to just touch each other, then tilt them a bit or whatever, keep in mind this takes a long time, but you dont need a bunch of crazy shit and twists and extentions to have a good handstyle, for example, SEVER below has a great handstyle, but its pretty simple, adding a bunch of stuff just makes it look messy and more toy imo, keep it simple for now, what youve posted is actually not a bad starting point

 

Am i going in the right direction?

 

Ju we're talking about tags here.

 

The arrow says your going right! Dno where ur heading for tho

 

I know that this thread is about tags but i couldnt find anywhere else to post. Anyways is this a good style?

 

How can't you find a thread to post that? It's called the toy black book thread