last "e is out of place
has no flow at all
thats tight
.Originally Posted by DRIPS!
pretty dope man.. i like the second half better though, flows better and is more spaced out
PM me if youre from 450/819
serge man your shits hot many different styles
this i did for an exchange
no real structure though serge
EYKS!!!! 4WC!
...remember injustice isn't injustice its just in us just as justice is just in ice...
...you know who...
PM FOR BATTLES
I'M EMBARRASSED!
ban serge this is for pen freestyles and out of like 15 peices 4 of them were pen freestyles
and the sextuple posting is WHACK
FUCK YOU
New style throw i'm trying out.
My affirmations kill emcees like assassination;
youENVYme
~~416~~>
i cant tel what the first character is but the n is dope
GO BREAK SOMETHING
EN
My affirmations kill emcees like assassination;
youENVYme
~~416~~>
some sloppy pen shit, i need to take more time on this shitt...
I think I'm going to give up on that throwup style
edit: crits.
mind or matter - I'm liking that style keep working on it
serge - some of those are pretty nice
Last edited by Street Smart; 01-17-2008 at 06:30 AM. Reason: crits
make a vertical bar in the E with the same jagged line thing. It will make it more legible and even better.New style throw i'm trying out.
Post Your Shit On The Same Post! Wrong Thread!
edit post i was talkin bout got deleted
Last edited by sketch3; 01-29-2008 at 08:38 PM.
FUCKEN BUMP THIS SHIT!
just stop double postin tho
haha
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