Thread for the experience writers to post their work and get critiqued by other experienced writers ..no need for shame talking or butt hurting if you can't take it don t post
Bugs, I always love your shit bro, nice simple letters with your influenced style. They all flow toogether and everything is consistent in the piece. In all honestly there is very very little things I can find wrong but if there's anything you could work on I'd say start practice bending and twisting your bars more, your deffinetly ready to progress to the wilderness. Keep Killin it!