wow alot of improvement blood way to go

 

yah i definatley brought my A game

 

blooood

 

owen shows he did a little more research on the letters

 

blood...liking the colors

 

owen...
the looseleaf paper takes soo much from a piece of work..
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blood no doubt

 

blood took it, his letters where WAY better

 

blood

 

blood all the way, nice structure, way to keep it clean

 

blood definitely took it with the color scheme. color choice can really effect how good the peice looks (and that can go for anything.) owen's letters are kicking some ass.. but the colors lose whats going on. theres just not enough contrast between pale orange and pink. Bloods Pink and green on the other hand are contrasting, which is why that scheme is so attractive...and why it pops so much more than Owen's does. and i couldnt agree more with Mesn, owen, do yourself justice and get a sketchbook!

hows that for critique.