Throwies

[Capo Izi]

Capo; Keep working on your can control man, and do do smiley faces >:|
I see what you were going for in your sketchs, it'll come out looking good if you keep practicing.

The smiley was on my old throw before I changed it a bit, I just thoguth it was clean and should post it.

But yeah so the sketches are good you're saying, just try to get it more like the throw?

[shie-ster]

for amanda


ill post more later, im tired as hell

[-Leski]

"Two Feet of Fre(a?)sh Snow In April".... Fuck canada >:[

Bump for critz, Yes I gave them.

Yes capo, keep working on those sketchs.
Work on cleaning up those letters.

[shie-ster]

i posted those pics yesterday and no one commented, so i went to the other thread.besides, 3 of those are new.and 2 threads isnt "every paint thread", now sh.

[Capo Izi]

Tried to clean 'em up a bit...

[-Leski]

Not quite there man, keep working on it.

[Capo Izi]

k, anything specific?

[-Leski]

The Grey one at the bottom's aPO is good, but the C is terrible now.
Take the C from the blue one below and start touching it up to fit with the aPO you have on the grey one.
Also slim down the P's back a little bit. But not too much. (grey)
Make All the letter the same height...

And just keep working on it.

[doomsday.718]

Really?...They seem really NYC like, I lived there for a while and I saw shit like this and liked it so I incorporated it....whats bad about 'em?

and my character is kinda sloppy, but thats essentially what he looks like, and I like it...

stoopid post im sorry but that looks nothing liek a "nyc style" honestly keep it to the books and go with ur own style

[maso1]

Capo your throwie is getting better although not really digging the C. Work on that and it'll look pretty good. Also you might be able to improve the A the a little by not making the tail so big also the thing on the A the comes down maybe try and round it off to suit the bubble style.

Cheers.

[oakstr1]

the bottom one is sloppy.crits?[/QUOTE]

leski - love the handstyle under your throw..not feelin letters but its chill.

in shie-ster theres a dope philly style tag off to the left...it looks like your rush like someone is comin up behind you. i think if you slow down a little it would look a lot better

[fOrSaQeN]

[Capo Izi]

stoopid post im sorry but that looks nothing liek a "nyc style" honestly keep it to the books and go with ur own style

That was a while ago post and drawing, and actually have you seen Sane(earlier stuff) and Cope2's throws? they do resemble my letters...

[HëRbN]

I like this peice better than almost all of what i have seen you do. the only thing i dont like is the dot over the I i think it should be snugged in to the left with the rest of it so it lines up better with the bottom of the I

[NEZ89]

forsaqen, your throwie kinda reminds me of cap

[-Leski]

I like this peice better than almost all of what i have seen you do. the only thing i dont like is the dot over the I i think it should be snugged in to the left with the rest of it so it lines up better with the bottom of the I

Yah, I feel the same way.
I'll do one up quick here, I actually have changed it a bit since I posted that.

I like it because unlike most stuff I've done before this is totally unique.
I had no influences in it, and so far I've never seen another throw like it.

[RockPaintScissors]

the bottom one is sloppy.crits?

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I like that style. It seems to flow pretty nicely.

The only thing i see that maybe you could try differently is making the bottom of the k flow more like the bottom of the A.

[RockPaintScissors]

Is this graffiti? It looks like someone just puked all over a wall to me.

[shie-ster]

theirs no need to try and beef with me.if you dont like it, say so.no need to get over enthusiastic about it.it is bad, so what, its on a fucking table, who cares.
some cleaner ones..

[Panda Jerk]

sick but uhhh change yur sig^^^^^