ray..not diggin the r but maybe its me..the rest of it is clean though
boredness at work
ray..not diggin the r but maybe its me..the rest of it is clean though
boredness at work
UH OH HOT DOG
Good page for the toy throwies so far! Keep it up boys, I dig every throwie on this page.
paper
painted in almost pitch black, fuck i need better eyesight
First Off You Know What It Is If You Heard Drake
Making Ho's Wobble Like A Bridge In An Earthquake
Joga - You're getting better. On that last one the shadow doesn't really make sense though.
Stussy - that r needs work.
I hate giving crits when I don't even know what I'm talking about.
I didn't want to waste to much space in my book. So here's some ideas.
Im not hating on your work Sex without condomns, but you don't need to post that many pics of essentially the same thing, at least not that big.
SAP - That looks fresh and simple, the second one I mean. It looks better than the first, try a cleaner one, on paper and take a pic. And yeah the tablets work magic. I have a intuous3. But my fucking dog destroyed the 50 dollar pen.
Any more crits on my throw?
blah blah blah
bumper carsOriginally Posted by smooth_nuts
nine stop biting gaint...NOW!
quick exchange for chump...
edit*sex is dopetastic...
That earn one is fresh. Just the cholo dots are out of place.
some new shit
Thats It...?
Yo no nothin, your throw-up needs work. You got no characteristic to it.
Keep tryin...
Last edited by HaLo_07; 08-14-2008 at 10:29 PM. Reason: Mis-Spelled
I like it, try a colored fill next time, that would look nice.
^^You don't need to post in every thread. Pick one or the other please.
i do what i please man.
nine that looks dope
Last edited by TESTER; 08-15-2008 at 12:56 PM.
Fix the E's and the R. R looks too much like an A. That could be fixed with a dot. The E's don't look like E's. Looks fuckin good tho.
nine that looks dope
sex-same crit as i posted in toy blackbooks
kinght-pretty nice, great size, although i suggest balancing that little thing on the top of the F.
teseter-very nice, i advise making that S wider and add the hole things on the Es and R.
Posting old flick for more crits.
Regardless of what I post I don't condone any illegal graffiti, although I stayed at a holiday inn once.
Bumpskis
Sex- Your shit is sweet, I just think the last Apples one had a little too much space between the letters.
big blue - more colors, cleaner, don't like overlaps if they are in a piece so simple.
thrice - cool, except for that last m looks too big, and that tumor on the right side of the m looks... like a tumor.
tester - sick style, like the cleaniless. that s is UGLY though. Make it more boxy like the other ones.
sex - I like that 7th one, the green looks good, that splash looks good, BUT those orange squiglys look shitty. I don't like the ones with diff colors on each one because they emphasize one letter more than another making it look imbalanced. If you did all VERY VERY bright colors but different it might look better. Similar brightness thoough.
knight - that f and the top of that s look decent. HOWEVER, the bottom of the s looks lumpy. And I dunno but sf seems kind of short. that's just me though.
aright so i got mine on paper, and it doesn't look as good but i'll keep working. those were the only colors i had. need to buy some pens. my s looks too small, the p looks to big and needs to be pushed more against the a. have i missed anything?
Shit is hot. Stay up.
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