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    disregard my retarded L i dont what happen when i was drawin that. i finally found a K too. crits??[/QUOTE]

    bump from 2 pages ago. can i get more then one crit please??? with a cherry on top
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    [QUOTE=Incognito;1229311]Been a while since I did anything, New name, and tweaked an old style a bit.

    Feel like the T and S don't fit well though.

    the T is dope.

    try extending the bottom of the S all the way next time.

    otherwise it looks tight.
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    Leaks, not bad, your keeping it simple. Your k kinda looks like a h though.
    Unsuccesful i think thts cool, clean it up a bit though.

    Ene, the bottom bars of your e's are to long and thin, fatten them up abit.

    Been trying to get a nice throw down so i can start painting it. Came up with these, crits would be helpful.




    Messd up on the z i think.

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    DUDE i love your shit so clean flow good and yet so simple
    just awsome
    i admire you XD

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    i dont like that hump thing on the z. idk maybe if you cleaned it up tho. anyone know what those are called anyway?
    hold my ak like a spraycan and spray you like a fat cap.

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    Zire: I agree that first hump is really messed up. Also the R and A in the first one are way to similar.

    Leaks: I like the A, but thats about it. The rest is to plain i think

    Sac: Pretty sick, try to keep it all the same size, but other than that nice.

    Changed around the W and S a bit, feel like i kinda fucked it up though

    That and a new two letter

    thoughts on either?

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    @incognito
    i thought you wrote thos. its a good thing you changed that w, that o is starting to look like a face. see the eye and eyebrow? you should expand on that idk. and the bottom of the s should be thicker like your 2 letter. which is good btw but i cant tell if thats a 2 or a z...
    hold my ak like a spraycan and spray you like a fat cap.

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    So basically drop the z and change the a/r Thanx for the crits
    " Live every day like it's your last,one day your going to be right. "

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    Quote Originally Posted by jupsick View Post
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    DUDE i love your shit so clean flow good and yet so simple
    just awsome
    i admire you XD

    Quote Originally Posted by smooth_nuts View Post
    dude get off his nuts before the friction causes a wild pube fire....damn
    ^^ XD

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    @zire exactly.
    @gentrifried why do you do the curves in the dot in the i? and i feel like the i should be the same size with the other two letters. other than those crits its dope but whats the thing next to the top one?


    hold my ak like a spraycan and spray you like a fat cap.

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    Quote Originally Posted by TONO View Post
    @zire exactly.
    @gentrifried why do you do the curves in the dot in the i? and i feel like the i should be the same size with the other two letters. other than those crits its dope but whats the thing next to the top one?


    the curves in the i dot is a smiling unibrow kind of guy as for the lil thing next to the top one Im not sure myself a curved bolt with a smilely face perhaps
    sometimes i wake up and am like what the F*** was i thinking last night

    thanks for the feedback much appreciated
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    from late august/early september cant remember
    i know the e is way to big

    flare - your letters seem to go from best to worst, work on the secong leg of your r, and i think the top of your a is too big, other than that it has pretty good flow though

    twos - i like the style you got going except dont make the top of your s so big in your first sketch

    crits please

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    My first time goin out and doin' graffiti I started small Trash, slides, whateva no walls yet. Criqs and Fries(jokes) both appreciated(Could use da laugh rite now)
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    @shpel your e is redonkculously big other than that its dope and what do you mean by the second leg on the r? the right or the left..
    @getrifried lol i thought you just half assed an eye and i lmaoed when you said you didnt know what it was.
    @jayz theres no picture...
    hold my ak like a spraycan and spray you like a fat cap.

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    Quote Originally Posted by TONO View Post
    @shpel your e is redonkculously big other than that its dope and what do you mean by the second leg on the r? the right or the left..
    @getrifried lol i thought you just half assed an eye and i lmaoed when you said you didnt know what it was.
    @jayz theres no picture...
    what chu talkin im lookin rite at it

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    @ jayz nvm its there now... hehe. whats pic number 2? and try to use bars im not feeling that huge arrow ontop of the j and im liking that sdent throw just clean it up
    hold my ak like a spraycan and spray you like a fat cap.

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    isa- your I is to big and none of your letters go together (the s is all rounded and the a isnt).
    flare- basicaly what shpel said but maybe you could change the tops to all face the same direction.
    shpel-your e is way too big, your p is a bit boring compared to the rest of your letters and your l looks like a backwards J.
    jayz- read the new to graffiti thread and stick to paper for a while.

    good work all of you though (cept for jayz jp )

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    [QUOTE=TONO;1230614]@shpel your e is redonkculously big other than that its dope and what do you mean by the second leg on the r? the right or the left..
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    the right(dont know why i didnt say that in the firrst place haha). just make it the same size as the left one and dont make the top of your r so big

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    your first time out and you hit a playground slide, what looks like the side of a house, and an orange storage container with red paint... not to mention horrible can control. i would look for some chill spots to work on that. but you should stay on paper for a while anyways.

    that being said, clean your throw up a bit and try putting some style into your letters.

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    jayz, i dont understand the second one


 

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