Throwies

[Blox]

Not to old but I left that hand style in the dust.

Give some critz home DAWGS!!! haha.

[coldpizza]

Rak- Try using an upper case R


these might not be awesome but i think it would help your flow.

[Blox]

An S with a butt?
What the fuck haha.

[Zarb]

Rak-Stop doing so much fancy shit, Like Whats up with the Urine background man?
Your shadow is fucked, MORE SIMPLE!!!! Oh ya, and pick a fucking name haha.

haha ya ill hold off on the details but whats wrong with the shadow? and hows the letter structure?
Blox- I dont like the A or the N but I really like the E and the I and the L is nice too

[coldpizza]

Doodled all day. Worked on the A and used a different N.


Any improvement?

[sallybsk]

are you trying to bite an 'A' from answer? lol?

F- make the bottom of the F less of just a circle, it looks fucking stupid, remember when you do a bar... its a BAR. I'm not saying it has to be a rectangle. It's just not correct to put it in the middle of the bottom of the letter as you did, try moving it to the left, it will still look ugly though, just less. it looks like a fucking puzzle piece or some shit

R- looks wayyyy better, keep playing around with it though, when you get better, your letters were make their own shape in throwies, don't even sketch, because when you're on paper, just try flowing. Just random shapes or some shit(nothing too ridiculous obviously) ALSO: Make your bars same size. the left of it looks skinnier than right. if you want to do the steez of the right looking bigger, make sure to bring it back, or just make a circle and play around with it at the bottom of the bar.

as I said for the A... is that a bite from answer? lulz? It's on paper though, either way, the A doesn't go with the rest of the letters. Bite a new one.

make the N more DEFINED as an N... specifically the fact that it's lowercase. that little part where you brought it back into the n(the half circle on the left), try making that go straight up, and not towards the right. You knawww I mean?

[oxiclean]

Does it say Fran or eran?

[KSFone]

Sooo I think this is my first post ever... CRITS PLEASE!

This one I like the dots, makes it kinda even I think...(i hate the E)


This one I took the dots and made it even on both sides, better E here.


Simple throw, no Idea what I was doing with the accents on it...


Not sure could be a throw, showing some just simple blocks and such.


And last but not least a more colorful and smoother throw, different F


Yea that's it, CRITS PLEASE! Sorry if there's image problems or they're too big, thanks guys!

[sallybsk]

you're right about the first E, drop it, the other Es look decent.
though you're OKAY at making letters. you always make your letters too shaky and/or make one bigger than the rest. Often it's your K or the bar coming off of the K... and your S.
Try consistency in the E and F... they both have two top extensions... that's just 1 bar away from being the same letter, so If they have some similarity I think it would look dope. That's just me. Because that's really what makes your style YOURS, not just random shapes, something that you can associate or identify is done by a certain writer.
Sometimes your extensions are too little, try making the letters a little less fat and a bit taller. Mix things up,

[coldpizza]

Thanks for all the helpful advice. that wasnt an attempt at an Answer bite. I just did a few other A's and my friends who better at throws by leaps and bounds just told me no, so i was just trying. But thank you for all the help.
Also it's fran.

[sallybsk]

aye aye, you're welcome. just remember to use it

throwies are quite amazing and fun once you get them down. and you can play with letter structure in an abstract way also. but that's later on

[Azul]

azul- dont write note

I don't my I posted it for my brother, I still write azule

[skull-e]

Azule: TRy making the top of your A flat so it matches the rest of your letters

and don't bother putting the drop shadow in yet, master your throw first

[coldpizza]

Azule, your Z needs to flow a little better. Maybe make the bottom bar a little thicker. Also for the entire thing maybe try making all the edges a little softer.




Fixed the F. Rounded the edges and move it back a little. Made it more F like. Kept the R. Changed the A and went with a capitol N.
Better?

[Paser1]

New to the site need crits please.

[B.S. POLICE]

im digging everything but the a man, that little bulge on the right bottom bar, make it match hight wise with eh s bulge. and the line that goes up on the s cut taht in half its too long. and the line that goes horizontal throwugh the s, make it match with the line that goes through the e

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

bump again

[LeaksOne]

tea drinker that nice i like it
paser the p an e are alright but the as needs work
tasr thats solid except your sr is alot bigger then your ta an lose the crown


jus started sketchin again. nothin impressive. my e is ugly. eh crits?

[B.S. POLICE]

pase you missed a shadow on the bottom of the e too homie

[hpir]

new name crits?