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    Does it say Fran or eran?

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    Sooo I think this is my first post ever... CRITS PLEASE!

    This one I like the dots, makes it kinda even I think...(i hate the E)


    This one I took the dots and made it even on both sides, better E here.


    Simple throw, no Idea what I was doing with the accents on it...


    Not sure could be a throw, showing some just simple blocks and such.


    And last but not least a more colorful and smoother throw, different F


    Yea that's it, CRITS PLEASE! Sorry if there's image problems or they're too big, thanks guys!

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    you're right about the first E, drop it, the other Es look decent.
    though you're OKAY at making letters. you always make your letters too shaky and/or make one bigger than the rest. Often it's your K or the bar coming off of the K... and your S.
    Try consistency in the E and F... they both have two top extensions... that's just 1 bar away from being the same letter, so If they have some similarity I think it would look dope. That's just me. Because that's really what makes your style YOURS, not just random shapes, something that you can associate or identify is done by a certain writer.
    Sometimes your extensions are too little, try making the letters a little less fat and a bit taller. Mix things up,

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    Thanks for all the helpful advice. that wasnt an attempt at an Answer bite. I just did a few other A's and my friends who better at throws by leaps and bounds just told me no, so i was just trying. But thank you for all the help.
    Also it's fran.

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    aye aye, you're welcome. just remember to use it

    throwies are quite amazing and fun once you get them down. and you can play with letter structure in an abstract way also. but that's later on

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    Quote Originally Posted by Stussy View Post
    azul- dont write note
    I don't my I posted it for my brother, I still write azule

    Last edited by Azul; 03-04-2009 at 03:28 AM.

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    Azule: TRy making the top of your A flat so it matches the rest of your letters

    and don't bother putting the drop shadow in yet, master your throw first

    PM me for slap in the face trades

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    how about i post a picture of my moldy asshole
    then when you get disgusted i'll just say chill it's not your asshole

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    Azule, your Z needs to flow a little better. Maybe make the bottom bar a little thicker. Also for the entire thing maybe try making all the edges a little softer.




    Fixed the F. Rounded the edges and move it back a little. Made it more F like. Kept the R. Changed the A and went with a capitol N.
    Better?
    Last edited by coldpizza; 03-04-2009 at 01:30 PM.

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    New to the site need crits please.
    Now in my younger days I used to sport a rag
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    Blued up from the shoe up, hardcore
    Loc'n, smokin and drinkin 'til we threw up ('til we threw up)
    At the yard, taggin, hittin fools up
    Ditchin my class, just to fuck yo' school up

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    im digging everything but the a man, that little bulge on the right bottom bar, make it match hight wise with eh s bulge. and the line that goes up on the s cut taht in half its too long. and the line that goes horizontal throwugh the s, make it match with the line that goes through the e

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    bump again
    I was Born Ready Mother Fucker...

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    tea drinker that nice i like it
    paser the p an e are alright but the as needs work
    tasr thats solid except your sr is alot bigger then your ta an lose the crown


    jus started sketchin again. nothin impressive. my e is ugly. eh crits?
    Fuck off.

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    pase you missed a shadow on the bottom of the e too homie

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    new name crits?

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    Kaw: I think you should define that 'K' a bit more.

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    Default Different -A- and different -S-


    Better -A- and -S- ??
    Now in my younger days I used to sport a rag
    Backpack full of cans plus a four-four mac
    G'd up from the feet up
    Blued up from the shoe up, hardcore
    Loc'n, smokin and drinkin 'til we threw up ('til we threw up)
    At the yard, taggin, hittin fools up
    Ditchin my class, just to fuck yo' school up

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    whats up.. been lurking around BS for a while now, this is my first post. here are a couple fills that i've done in the past few days. looking for some crits and ways to improve and so forth. i have been playing around on paper for a while and this week picked up some cans and started practicing in a stairwell in my yard. any advice is appreciated.

    [IMG] http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3644/...4daecd.jpg?v=0 [/IMG]

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    toy throwbattle yall!


    toy throwup battle callout
    Word:novel
    Deadline:March 6th
    Rules:No digital modifications,color is your choice,one entry per person and all entries must be on paper.
    Pm all your entries to Smooth_nuts

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    workin on shit...



    Thatguywhodrinkstea- pretty damn sweet yo..

    Azule-definitely work on it..

    Crits?
    Rep the 207
    DRUG
    ECK
    M!

    RIP Elliot, RIP Guin

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    Crits?
    Paser- Looks pretty solid.
    Posek- Real nice
    Last edited by Zarb; 03-04-2009 at 08:32 PM.


 

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