Throwies

[DirtyDozen520]

Kaw: I think you should define that 'K' a bit more.

[Paser1]

Better -A- and -S- ??

[yikes3]

whats up.. been lurking around BS for a while now, this is my first post. here are a couple fills that i've done in the past few days. looking for some crits and ways to improve and so forth. i have been playing around on paper for a while and this week picked up some cans and started practicing in a stairwell in my yard. any advice is appreciated.

[IMG] http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3644/...4daecd.jpg?v=0 [/IMG]

[smooth_nuts]

toy throwbattle yall!


toy throwup battle callout
Word:novel
Deadline:March 6th
Rules:No digital modifications,color is your choice,one entry per person and all entries must be on paper.
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[Capo Izi]

workin on shit...



Thatguywhodrinkstea- pretty damn sweet yo..

Azule-definitely work on it..

Crits?

[Zarb]

Crits?
Paser- Looks pretty solid.
Posek- Real nice

[smooth_nuts]

toy throwup battle callout
Word:novel
Deadline:March 6th
Rules:No digital modifications,color is your choice,one entry per person and all entries must be on paper.
Pm all your entries to Smooth_nuts

[BigBlueViolence]

I'm feeling the fuck out of this.

[oxiclean]

As am I.

[KSFone]

you're right about the first E, drop it, the other Es look decent.
though you're OKAY at making letters. you always make your letters too shaky and/or make one bigger than the rest. Often it's your K or the bar coming off of the K... and your S.
Try consistency in the E and F... they both have two top extensions... that's just 1 bar away from being the same letter, so If they have some similarity I think it would look dope. That's just me. Because that's really what makes your style YOURS, not just random shapes, something that you can associate or identify is done by a certain writer.
Sometimes your extensions are too little, try making the letters a little less fat and a bit taller. Mix things up,

Took your advice ( thanks again ) and here's the outcome...



The pictures a little bright cause the flash was weird and i couldn't figure out how to turn it off, CRITS PLEASE!

[LeaksOne]

oxiclean and bigblue thanks. i thought it wasnt that good but hey. whatevers clever. anybody think i need to work on anything? look 2 posts up to see the pic

[B.S. POLICE]

yeah your t looks wack, try and tweak it around alil, also add some shadows

[blunttokes]

Crits?
Paser- Looks pretty solid.
Posek- Real nice

reminds me of sirone lol

[LeaksOne]

yeah your t looks wack, try and tweak it around alil, also add some shadows

like how? i was jus tryna make it flow with the A an R. shadows will possibly be in the next sketch cuz i still need to work on my 3d

[B.S. POLICE]

i think its the left going throug the a thats bothering me, try to take that line out but basically keep the same shape and see what happens

[LeaksOne]

i think its the left going throug the a thats bothering me, try to take that line out but basically keep the same shape and see what happens

oh yea i jus did that so i could make the other side of the T. check back tomorrow. the line will be gone an i will have a shadow. i would do it now but if i go in my room im guna start playin video games an then its a wrap for the night.

[Azul]

[skull-e]

tea drinker that nice i like it
paser the p an e are alright but the as needs work
tasr thats solid except your sr is alot bigger then your ta an lose the crown


jus started sketchin again. nothin impressive. my e is ugly. eh crits?

love it, just make G the more fluid

[TastySesamcrew]

Azule: TRy making the top of your A flat so it matches the rest of your letters

and don't bother putting the drop shadow in yet, master your throw first

shits fuckin sick, great style man.

[RedEyes]

Tasty-use a light color to outline make that shit pop! n lose the bracelet.