408- sorry brother that looks awful. u gotta read the new to graff thread. start simple, just like the letters on your keyboard stay uppp.
stus- i like the guy with the mustache
zarb- ur gettin much better. try and work on the bottom left of your L where u connect the whole letter. the top of the S looks too big and the width of the top of the A should be a little bit bigger. work on proportioning your letters. ur 3d doesnt make any sense either but thatll come with practice.
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shitty robot.
there was like ten workers right around the other side of this wall cutting up a big ass tree that fell over. haha.
threw in those highlight things kind of wish i didnt but w.e
stussy im feelin those. i like the one with the comb over haha.
reach looks good go put that shit up.
408 looks ok dont like ur k.
name the fressh- really feelin ur k. dont really like your o's tho
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you should be too.
yo emik you should put a dot over your i i think it would look better then with none
kite
bottom of the page bump.
shitty robot.
there was like ten workers right around the other side of this wall cutting up a big ass tree that fell over. haha.
threw in those highlight things kind of wish i didnt but w.e
stussy im feelin those. i like the one with the comb over haha.
reach looks good go put that shit up.
408 looks ok dont like ur k.
name the fressh- really feelin ur k. dont really like your o's tho
yea i think so tooo now that i look at it thanks.
Last edited by expozay; 04-03-2009 at 01:26 PM.
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you should be too.
Reach- I like it, Nice and consistent.
Zarb- Your getting really good you probably know by now the more you write the better your shit will turn out.
Emik- Dont bump yourself after 2 posts. Your shine is not right, You missed on the K, M and E. Make your letters the same height. The shadow doesent follow the letter height or shape. Just fix that up and you should be good to go.
Quick throw, but does the T look better if I move it over to the right abit?
i would move it in more...kinda looks like it says skwin t
Originally Posted by Stussy
i have a 2 letter, but im debating on doing a 1 letter..
some ideas...
yo tht lookes so much like royce from long island . its dope! i would stay away from one letter throws
yea...he does do a one letter throw doesnt he...I guess i'll just stick with RZ and do the hair on the 2 letter...
Dank- i liked your other name better
Emik- Ya lose the high lights for now and it will be pretty straight
Skwint- Love it except I like the T alittle closer to the rest of your letters
Stussy- I really like the one with the hat, and all the hair ones
Last edited by Zarb; 04-03-2009 at 09:39 PM.
2 Las, not bad .. but why the same thing three times to spread?
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Sqwint- sick i like it
emik - your tags are so fresh but im not feelin ur throwies sorry man. think yours would look better w/o bubble letters
crits please
EDIT:
kite - sorry didnt see urs. I like it, just shrink the bottom bubbleon the k and define your e more
Last edited by flowtag; 04-04-2009 at 12:45 PM.
font size to zero ..
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^ i like the k but the rest of the letters need a little work and the shadows off
o and make sure the bottom left of the k is equal in size to the top left part u no wat im saying?
Change the top of the M, loose the random little bump in the A on the right side near the bottom, make a nice drop shadow, not really feeling the 2 lines for the hole in the A
Name that fresh- Did you fill the black with a mop then use a deco?
Kam- The shadow is fucked
Just testing a couple of points on my letter and I fucked my shadow in some places.
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