.The.OhZ.: Lol, ty. I wasn't sure about the exclamation point, 'cause the bar on the left for the J looked sort of like, lonely or some shit, I thought it needed something to balance.
Stussy: Second one is better, and the ' on the left looks better than on the right, imo.
TJK: The T in the first one is sick, but in both the R, E, and S need some serious work, there isn't much flow. If you keep the T like that, I would suggest making the whole throw like this shape: ^, starting off small on the sides and getting taller in the middle.
JEVAoneR
Originally Posted by ..romero..
@jeva - that last one is so sick!!
some quick new throws crits?
crust- straighten out your c other wise itss nice
jeva- good, but fix ur J it looks too much like an l
Stussy- Thanks i pm'd u urs
Rest- fix your holes on the R and E
ASK- dope
any better?
Emediation I think it's getting a lot better. The whole overlettering thing isn't consistent though. it just kinda makes it look sloppy, in my opinion.
TJK I hate it. It just bothers me for some reason.
Stussy Digging that, I just hate how it's done in pen. It'd look a hundred times better with marker.
TECKN Please be kidding. That thing is ugly as fuck.
Last edited by CrustOner; 05-11-2009 at 05:37 PM.
No More Weekly Toy Battles.
Heres something i did when i was Bored in Class. Any pointers
hahahaha revolt..
get rid of the arrow. The R has nothing to do with any of the other letters.
No More Weekly Toy Battles.
not done yet. definitely a rough draft.
@reboot - you're missing 3-d on the "R" and it's not consistent thickness,
but it looks ill!
@crust - i agree with the other guy, flip your "T"
@umer - i like the "UM" of the top and "ER" on the bottom haha
Rest
Revolt: what was said above and the letter spacing needs to be better the o looks like a D. just try to get an overall style for you letters
Reboot?: don't like the r but the character is sick
thx for tha crits ye its just a real rough draft imma work on it tonite.
Emediation: I love the S, K, and the shadow but the A needs work and it looks weird overlapped.
GoGetSome: You have some good ideas, but your letters are really sloppy. Clean 'em up a bit and make the lines straighter and it'll look good.
CrustOner: I love the U and the T, but the rest seems pretty out of flow with the whole thing. What markers did you use for that, btw?
CaughtSlippin: It seems obvious that you're new to graffiti, but read up on some styles first, I can't really crit this. I'm not sure about this being a throw, but usually throws have curved lines, not super sharp points on the corners of letters. Also, the arrow is weird. The letters don't really look fat, there isn't an overall flow to it either. Keep working at it, but I bet there's like ten writers named Revolt, so try coming up with a more original name, maybe with less letters since you're a beginner.
KRE1: I like everything except the R and the B, your character is awesome, though.
TJK: The one on the left I'll refer to as 1, the one on the top right is 2, and the one on the bottom right is 3. This is how I see it. ES from 1, R and T from 2. Three is the worst there, and the shadow is weird. I really like the T from 2.
JEVAoneR
TJK: i like tha T and E in tha second pic but tha R doesnt flow its a bit small
I used the Elmer's Painters Markers. They suck.
No More Weekly Toy Battles.
KRE1-Make your ish the same size.
EDIT:Crits on throwie?
Last edited by weakfingers; 05-11-2009 at 10:37 PM.
yeah i was going for a goofy ass look cuz i was going for a stoned kind of theme but yeah i think it would look waay nicer if it all flowed tha same sizeKRE1-Make your ish the same size.
EDIT:Crits on throwie?
also diggin tha S but iono mayb tha top part i wouldnt box it off like that i would round it out
pretty much done with it... dont know if i like it or not
new to tha site couldnt figure out how to upload more than one pic at a time ha.
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