Came- I really dislike that throw.
the extra line in the C, the sperm in the A, your M is crooked as shit,
and your E has a lip. Don't lift up your marker for every new line,
make the whole letter at once.
Kem, you are going in the right direction.
You can do all those letters in one or two strokes,
and the E and M are really nice in that first one.