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[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

new name just starting out crits?

spam- like it alot just ur m is slanted over unless that is suppost to be like that

[l3monade]

thatguywhodrinkstea- make all ur letters the same ssize

[akro_one]

Yeah its a bit blurry... phone camera. Front of the a is kind of fucked... Other than fixing that is there anything else?

[MARTYRaz]

peg-ever thought of dumpin the s and just writin pam?? or just kickin the extra do dads on top of the other letters??

[PegCityBoy]

peg-ever thought of dumpin the s and just writin pam?? or just kickin the extra do dads on top of the other letters??

What are these do dads you speak of

[MARTYRaz]

the things at the top..notice how the original has one on the S and the and the restof the letters have more than one..the M has 3..and make all ur letters the same size and straight..wat i mean is move with ur letters..i can tell ur stiff and dont move ur body a whole lot while throwin it up..go with ur letters..wen they go down go down with them and move over with them..i like it tho..wouldnt mind seeing that alot more...

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

crits?

[-Empty-Can-]

i really don't like how your E has that bubble thing popping out. and make the line on the inside of the L a little shorter because it makes it look kinda like a C

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

the m is a little off but betteR?

[-Empty-Can-]

yea i like it better now maybe make the side of the L slightly smaller so it doesn't stick out like a bubble.

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

think im good to go after that?

[-Empty-Can-]

yea
except now that i look at it make the tops of your letters the same size because they look like a staircase. the bottom is even though

[gumOnShoe]

i'm gettin tired of this S it's not workin with the rest.. anyway all i had was red and green merry fucking christmas

try this.

[PegCityBoy]

oo that it's meant to be the drop shaddow

[hAveK x]

here's mine, crits please... says trek

[Zarb]

been workin on a 2 letter for a new name. Ters

Havek- shits not legible at all man, i would say start all over and do much simpler letters

[Jokz]

i disagree with that one, i think havek's style is dope.
it may look not legible cuz the balpoint pen or wtv but if u use a ny fat cap that shit will be clear. i digg it, thats my opinion. keep it up

[BigBlueViolence]

Havoc- Shit's weak

Zarb- try to make your T in one motion

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

thinking of going out tommorow critS?

zarb- try and make the stem of ur T not so fat
havek- havek ur style is unique i just dont feel it

[Anion]

Havoc- Shit's weak

Zarb- try to make your T in one motion

His username is Havek, you dummy. Open your eyes. It's right there for you to look at and spell it right.