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    Sorry massacre, I just thought i was to toy to crit or give advice but...
    Ill street- I would say lose those lines that are going into each other, you know? like sorta keep them to themselves.
    Resk- I think that you should maybe make the bottom right leg of the K a little sharper like the rest of them

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    Sbal-Work with simples first man. It's been said a million times before but just work with the letters on your keyboard. If you're fixed on the bubbles try to make the letters consistent. Some parts are fat while others are too skinny like on your s and it looks weird.
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    I like the H but I honestly don't know what the first letter is, a J with a hole and bump on it? Maybe less of an angle on it would be better too.


    crits please! I need to practice throwies after the ones last night hah
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    Yeah I think that if that is a J deffinitely lose the hole. And Sab i think you should lower that line in the A a little bit.

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    It's an A actually but you think it looks too much like a J?

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    Yeah you should move the hole more left and up.

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    Heres a throwie I painted a while ago. Painted on a old trailer in the woods over some old paint tests and crap. It's not very good I know, say what you want I can take it.


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    Yeah man your really going to want to work on that Z and clean up the A
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    I like that middle on sbal, I think the B & L are good the rest need minor tweeks
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    smoker those last two have got to be the best style ive ever seen. if i was walking through town and saw that on glass window id shit myself and take a pic

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    I like the S on the white one, and the L on the red one, B and A are pretty good to, cept the B looks kinda funky on the orange. But thats just my opinion.

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    No, whole thing is wack. Start over. Start observing throws and learn how to construct a good one.
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    sball all that shiet is whack, i agree with him
    i suggest going like to page 51 and going onto from there, or start studying other people's throwies that are up and get on from there.

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    Thanks for the crits guys. I sketched these throws up before I read Flask and Crust's comments so tell me whatcha think. Now, I'm goin into a deep study sesh.
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    Your lines look maaad shakey, your border is way out of proportion.

    The a and l are to big in the first and the a also looks like an r.

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    Shitty marker

    igrnore the shaky lines, shitty p and not too great e hah. i did this on my lap with a wobbly notebook and shit goin on.

    crits specifically on the R/r? I want to get them down, badly. Just don't know which direction to go in.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Zazza View Post
    Heres a throwie I painted a while ago. Painted on a old trailer in the woods over some old paint tests and crap. It's not very good I know, say what you want I can take it.

    the A need to be as wide as the Z. lose the squiggle for now. my .02

    @ RYPE I like those 2. they are not hella OG but then again who is? I think the Y is my fave tho. I ACTUALLY think the E is ur weakest letter. the r's both look fine to me. peace.
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    Thanks for the crits man.
    I was so drunk on time i sat in a Urinal and pissed with my pants on.

    Imagination is more important than knowledge. For knowledge is limited to all we now know and understand, while imagination embraces the entire world, and all there ever will be to know and understand. Logic will get you from A to B. Imagination will take you everywhere.

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    yeah, looking at the capital R again tho maybe it should have the little triangle thingy like the E has and the Y shapes too. knawmee?
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    pick a style any style, crits always appreciated.

    ignore the lines inside the top p, in the last picture they were already there.
    Last edited by iPwnF00lz; 05-15-2010 at 05:08 PM.
    I was so drunk on time i sat in a Urinal and pissed with my pants on.

    Imagination is more important than knowledge. For knowledge is limited to all we now know and understand, while imagination embraces the entire world, and all there ever will be to know and understand. Logic will get you from A to B. Imagination will take you everywhere.

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    top two are my faves, the right hand side the y dividing line comes down to far.
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