I like that middle on sbal, I think the B & L are good the rest need minor tweeks
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I like that middle on sbal, I think the B & L are good the rest need minor tweeks
Originally Posted by Vagrant
I like the S on the white one, and the L on the red one, B and A are pretty good to, cept the B looks kinda funky on the orange. But thats just my opinion.
No, whole thing is wack. Start over. Start observing throws and learn how to construct a good one.
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sball all that shiet is whack, i agree with him
i suggest going like to page 51 and going onto from there, or start studying other people's throwies that are up and get on from there.
Thanks for the crits guys. I sketched these throws up before I read Flask and Crust's comments so tell me whatcha think. Now, I'm goin into a deep study sesh.
Your lines look maaad shakey, your border is way out of proportion.
The a and l are to big in the first and the a also looks like an r.
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igrnore the shaky lines, shitty p and not too great e hah. i did this on my lap with a wobbly notebook and shit goin on.
crits specifically on the R/r? I want to get them down, badly. Just don't know which direction to go in.
Last edited by iPwnF00lz; 05-14-2010 at 09:49 PM.
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Imagination is more important than knowledge. For knowledge is limited to all we now know and understand, while imagination embraces the entire world, and all there ever will be to know and understand. Logic will get you from A to B. Imagination will take you everywhere.
the A need to be as wide as the Z. lose the squiggle for now. my .02Heres a throwie I painted a while ago. Painted on a old trailer in the woods over some old paint tests and crap. It's not very good I know, say what you want I can take it.
@ RYPE I like those 2. they are not hella OG but then again who is? I think the Y is my fave tho. I ACTUALLY think the E is ur weakest letter. the r's both look fine to me. peace.
Last edited by soath; 05-15-2010 at 09:33 AM. Reason: rype
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Thanks for the crits man.
I was so drunk on time i sat in a Urinal and pissed with my pants on.
Imagination is more important than knowledge. For knowledge is limited to all we now know and understand, while imagination embraces the entire world, and all there ever will be to know and understand. Logic will get you from A to B. Imagination will take you everywhere.
yeah, looking at the capital R again tho maybe it should have the little triangle thingy like the E has and the Y shapes too. knawmee?
"True merit, like a river, the deeper it is, the less noise it makes." ~Edward Frederick Halifax
pick a style any style, crits always appreciated.
ignore the lines inside the top p, in the last picture they were already there.
Last edited by iPwnF00lz; 05-15-2010 at 05:08 PM.
I was so drunk on time i sat in a Urinal and pissed with my pants on.
Imagination is more important than knowledge. For knowledge is limited to all we now know and understand, while imagination embraces the entire world, and all there ever will be to know and understand. Logic will get you from A to B. Imagination will take you everywhere.
top two are my faves, the right hand side the y dividing line comes down to far.
"True merit, like a river, the deeper it is, the less noise it makes." ~Edward Frederick Halifax
Rype- I like those two with the fatty outlines
New style not really feelin the B on SB
Sbal your shadows need some work, but thats all i can see
i shouldnt really be talking though because i fucked up on my 3d real bad lol
:/
i would twist ur A counter clockwise a little. so the bar comes over the top and down a bit. also make ur S more like the BA combo, it should have holish sorta spaces in it, so it matches. my .02
"True merit, like a river, the deeper it is, the less noise it makes." ~Edward Frederick Halifax
^ Make the B a little closer and you're set.
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