Dude, Rype, your letter height has to be three times your line width, if not a little bit higher, for capital E's to work...
Seriously, write it like Rype, but have the r the capital r the same size as the other letters. It's a shit ton easier. Save the all caps one liners for another day when you can put them to better use.
ROES: Looks like ROPE in one of them. Rotate the E to the left to match the rest of your letters. Your shit overlapping on the left bottom side of the S over the e looks bad.
Originally Posted by suparjafar
everything on this page is silly start over fools
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Pedo battle
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You honestly think that looks like a bubble D man?
I was so drunk on time i sat in a Urinal and pissed with my pants on.
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Im not used to writing d's its for a battle
Show me your D
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He needs to rotate that shit 180 degrees, so the tips at the top and looks lowercase to match other letters.
I'd make it have a top to match the base is all, don't get your panties in a bunch learn to crit you work yourself so you can tell whats up with some things.. other than that capitalize the e.
I was so drunk on time i sat in a Urinal and pissed with my pants on.
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His E looks fine bro, you love some capital e's huh?
and when you crit yourself your ego often makes your opinion bias. He want's other peoples opinions if he's posting on here, nobody asked you to crit him. When people give you crits you're supposed to listen to them, which obviously you don't since your last like five tag posts have looked identical, just saying, no beef though.
For future reference, when you crit, you tell them what to fix about their letters. Not ask a rhetorical question first just to be a dick.
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finaly made a little progress on my throw
crits anyone?
or you can use like those paint roller things to tag high spots where no one can't tag besides with a ladder.
and you can make a little bonfire with the paint brush's while your trying to get the spot77 CREW
lololol every letter was caps except the e, I'm not your bro.
I was so drunk on time i sat in a Urinal and pissed with my pants on.
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My "panties" were not in a bunch i was trying to see your opinion on how to do a D. I cant do D's but now i know. Thank you.
Xfish- errrr.. I dont know how much progress you've made man it still looks extremely wack too me. Just start it over
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trust me its better than before
it really really sucked
Last edited by Xfish; 06-11-2010 at 06:22 PM.
or you can use like those paint roller things to tag high spots where no one can't tag besides with a ladder.
and you can make a little bonfire with the paint brush's while your trying to get the spot77 CREW
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For the lulz, what I do it for.
P's and O's look the same lowercase or uppercase. The only letter that was definitely uppercase was the D...
since the e was lowercase I figured that was what he was going for...
UEKS- Your e and u are curvy, and your k and s are sharp. Pick one or the other haha. The line in the middle of the u needs to come down further, S and E need a little bit of work on the letter structure. Start with keyboard block letters, forreal, then tweak them and make sure your letter width, and letter style stay the same. Obviously your practicing, it'll get better.
Last edited by 2FNK?; 06-11-2010 at 09:48 PM.
thanks man and i guess i should also make the u look like a v cus thats what its supposed to be haha ill work on it.
or you can use like those paint roller things to tag high spots where no one can't tag besides with a ladder.
and you can make a little bonfire with the paint brush's while your trying to get the spot77 CREW
Haha, v's with round bubble letters are tricky, don't sweat it. It's hard to get the bottom to look right.
Three steps to self-assessing your work (learned this in a college art class, that I soon dropped out of):
Look at it from your peripheral to assess aesthetics, basically just to see if it looks right subconciously, without paying attention to the details or individual pieces.
Then, i guess when it comes to graffiti, compare the letters to eachother as far as height, width, line thickness, 3d, etc.
To finish it off, look at each letter (or piece of your drawing) as an individual, cover the rest of it if you have to, and make sure it's what you want it to be, resembles the original keyboard style letter, and has the same style as how you want your piece to look.
round out your letters for now.. seems like there to square... squares dont go well with bombing...
if i read it correct its UEKS?
imo ur word needs a change ... SUEK or like SEUK KESU..
and SWER LIVES ON!
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His name is VEKS
sense veks already got crits..
I was so drunk on time i sat in a Urinal and pissed with my pants on.
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