it looks good rype except the r looks more like an a to me
it looks good rype except the r looks more like an a to me
Only Fuck Fat Bitches Crew !!
The Dead space in this shit is killing me....Originally Posted by iPwnF00lz
sense veks already got crits..
shadow is off.sense veks already got crits..
TheBoredOne
Ive been doin it a while but i never learned anything until now so hope you like it
Your letter spacing is way off in the top one. line width is off on the D and the middle of the E.... Don't put the one in your throwie, if your going to put it anywhere, put it in your tag, but personally, I'd say keep your tag the way it is.
make one with all your letters in the bottom style. Just work on the width of the B. Other than that, I like it.
Use your tag thats above the top one. I like it as well.
hey i cant figure out how to get letter spacing down and like this?
Last edited by TheBoredOne; 06-12-2010 at 07:08 PM.
That E is much better rype.
The R and E ae terrible bored
If there is hope, it lies in the writers.
Hmmm tryin to get better at R but E was just a accident while i was making it
Looks like an F to me
Thanks dudes I'll work on it.
ignore the horrible P, working on my R, opinions on this R compared to the other?
weird chizle tipped marker
Last edited by iPwnF00lz; 06-12-2010 at 08:06 PM.
I was so drunk on time i sat in a Urinal and pissed with my pants on.
Imagination is more important than knowledge. For knowledge is limited to all we now know and understand, while imagination embraces the entire world, and all there ever will be to know and understand. Logic will get you from A to B. Imagination will take you everywhere.
Bored- look at your E, see how all the other letters have a flush and flat left side, and the E is all messy on the left? Also, work on the other side of the E use a few curvy lines like the rest of your letters. Make your O and Ethe same size as the rest of your letters, they're a little bit bigger.
To check my letter width, I start with the end of my pen/pencil on one side of my letter, and grab it at the end of the first letter, then pick it up and check each letter is the same width.
For letter spacing, with a pencil, lightly draw the outline of the parts of the letters that are covered up, and make sure the space thats overlapped is pretty much the same each time. erase it if it's right, if not, leave it, and try again, looking to see where you can fix it in the one that now shows where your mistakes are. It gets easier the more you do it.
The R is better but its too fat compared to the other letters, gettin there though
If there is hope, it lies in the writers.
some1 already writes bored... easst coast and is pretty good
uppin 4 crits
Only Fuck Fat Bitches Crew !!
Hipe:
1.Too much space in the h, and you pinched it too much at the bend.
2. Line width... need I say more?
3. Your i needs work
4. The huge bottom part of your e doesn't look right.
5. Looks like you tried to do shadow on the h, but 3d everywhere else.
6. Straight lines to split curved letters doesn't look good, and they are too long anyways.
7. Letter size, your e is huge.
There's your crits.
Thanks for givin me some tips i just made this took about half an hour
edit: I posted it here cause i don't consider it to be in the toys piece section
Last edited by TheBoredOne; 06-12-2010 at 10:40 PM.
Middle name 1-2-0-8 and I don't complicate, I keep busy and have no time to waste.
Yo im not accusing you but if your bitin off of the graffiti creator stop, cuz its not helpin you and makes you look toy. and again im not sayin you are but it looks alot like itThanks for givin me some tips i just made this took about half an hour
edit: I posted it here cause i don't consider it to be in the toys piece section
bump!!
Middle name 1-2-0-8 and I don't complicate, I keep busy and have no time to waste.
haggard ass flows always look nice when the person can toss down there ish wit style!!! 5*
King With Out A Crown - Big Krit
Well if you dont consider it a piece, and its not a throw, what is it?
If there is hope, it lies in the writers.
Lol? i like the enthusiasm on this website yes ive been to the graff creator but i can guarantee that i sat there for half an hour using bars i have no need to bite
A Thriece?
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