1.Too much space in the h, and you pinched it too much at the bend.
2. Line width... need I say more?
3. Your i needs work
4. The huge bottom part of your e doesn't look right.
5. Looks like you tried to do shadow on the h, but 3d everywhere else.
6. Straight lines to split curved letters doesn't look good, and they are too long anyways.
7. Letter size, your e is huge.
There's your crits.
Thanks for givin me some tips i just made this took about half an hour
edit: I posted it here cause i don't consider it to be in the toys piece section
Last edited by TheBoredOne; 06-12-2010 at 10:40 PM.
Anything you paint on a wall belongs in bombs/ pieces thread.
Throwies drawn beling in throwies
anything else drawn belongs in blackbooks thread.
Evolve- work on throwing some style into it. and keep spacing even. Fill in the gap between the 'L' and 'V' Looks like you've put a whole lot of time into your tags. Work on throwies now.
Mr. Yarbles- That's fuckin fresh...
Bored- That doesn't look like a throwie....
For some reason it looked better when I first drew it :P
Evolve. Your V and your L look the same dude. Keep working on your simple shit before you try to throw style in there. Keep working on the kind of stuff you did in the blue. And make that flow. THEN throw style in there.
This is all pencill.... don't have money for paint markers to sketch with... sorry if its not dark enough... please tell me what im supposed to improve on.... its supposed to be curved...
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