posek your 3d is all muffed up.
posek your 3d is all muffed up.
betteR?
I was Born Ready Mother Fucker...
yeah much better
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Crits?
I've since fixed the letter size issue, these are old but all I got and I know the shading is shit too haha. Crits on style and execution would be appreciated though
FREE DKAY
Originally Posted by weakfingers
Your shit looks tight! Why can't i have that writing hand you have?
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can i gett some crits please
'cause we ain't playin up here in New York
SINEONER 516 BWI
posek- your letters seem to get larger from beginning to end work on proportion
ashis- lose the fish hooks things on the h and the 3d is off doesn't need shadowing at the top of the h
note- top one has best potential the t needs work and lose the shines and add ons for now just work on structure.
sine- resize your image .. but the n looks kind of like a k the i looks like a c and don't extend the bottom bar of the e out like that ..so work on your i and n.
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Sine- I thought your N was a K that sort of looked like an H. Maybe try not making the top right section so large.
Note-top one is the best, and your T's are hurting the worst. as far as the execution with the paint, make sure to cut back with fill colors if your outline drips
messin around with a capital E ...
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rekt- try bubbling out that e like your r and k... just an idea
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hes doin it right.
h1p, thanks, thats just what i was thinkin, the t is throwin me off just because of the style of the whole throwie. I'm thinkin name change cuz after i started writin this i realized how much i fucking hate t's and n's lol but i'll keep workin on this for now cuz all practice is good practice.
as for crits, h1p pretty much hit everyone's nail on the head right thurr
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try rounding the top of the p so it doesn't look quite so much like the e
plus it'll flow with the dot of the i and make the whole piece more symmetrical
im diggin it as a whole though that h is dope
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the outermost outline was done with a different can and a different cap, so the fill wasn't the problem there, just amateur can control mixed with shitty paint lol and yeah ive been tryin to fix that t for a while ill post a flik when i get somethin that works thanks for the help
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give me some advice b.s. police your more advanced than most of us here
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sketch a throw dude
I dont write, you dont know me.
here
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that middle bar in the h is too skinny that thing that hangs of the side on the rightis too much. same in the i. your p goes in too much making it look like an e. your e should be more distinct e looking on the bottom to middle part. heres the bottomline your trying to hard with this whole edgy and smooth combo on your letters, i know what you want it to look like but your just no where close to actually make it look like what you want. dumb your style down, dont doo too much aggresive lines on the outside of the letters, remember its a toss that shit is bubble letters. i know i might sound slightly hypocritical here but its like starting with simps and bars. you dont get to aggressive edgy throws without starting with basic round ones first
I dont write, you dont know me.
I dont write, you dont know me.
these are from when i first started writing:
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