Throwies

[-NAUZ-]

first one the 'e' looks like a 'g' make it face the right way, i like the genral idea try and styalise it more now, instead of following a genral theme

[Fuzzy2]

iight iight cool thanks for the crits. ill work on it.

[-NAUZ-]

hi guys, i need help on my throwies, i it's something that i dont know how simple or basic to go, well basically im confused and need help :P
heres some i did earleir, and like :P


not sure bout the bottom of the 'Z', 'A', and 2nd half of 'N'

not sure about the 'Z' puzzeling me alot :/ and too wavey?

a done up repeate of the 1st one looks better i believe with out the followed through lines onto each letter

but yeh their my currnet throwies,
if anyone wants to exchange throwies, an do each others names, or if any one wants to give me ideas, advice, or try my name 'NAUZ' or 'nauz' in their throwie style please do

thanks in advance :P

[ASHiS]

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[ILL STREET BLUES]

i be exspressing to my full capabilities,
now im living in correctional facilities
cme?

[ASHiS]

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[ASHiS]

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[ASHiS]

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crits

[-NAUZ-]

ashi that's tight, need to join the 'I' to the rest to amke a good flow and make it a wee bit bigger, and mabey an idea would be to make the 2nd part of the 'H' flow with the bottom of the others, and then flow with the I could be good

[ASHiS]

I was actually changing my name to Aski haha! but that looks good
?Ima use this name if its cool!

[-NAUZ-]

ah yeh sorry a quick initial view, but it is a 'K' i am sorry

and use what ever name you feel comfortable with

[ASHiS]

Ha yea dude! i didn't like the double s so i changed it to ASKi.

[H1P30N3R]

having the i at the end of your name seems like it could be hard to work with .. well atleast for me it would be.

[ASHiS]

What do you mean like hmm should i add a letter to it... what letter?

[H1P30N3R]

nauz - don't make so many squiggly lines in your letters. make them simple do some research to get ideas.And personally i like the lowercase a better than the capital one just less squiggles

[H1P30N3R]

I would get an opinion on that i from a more experienced writer because i could be wrong before you try changing it. aske, askr, askm .. but yea get some other opinions 1st

[-NAUZ-]

i think the 'i' flows and fits, he jsut has to put it in the right place,
and thanks for the tips 'h1p'
mind trying a throwie in your handstyle?

[ASHiS]

hmmmm ASKIO

[H1P30N3R]

handstyles and throws are 2 different things lol

here http://www.bombingscience.com/graffi...ead.php?t=2185

[H1P30N3R]

quick try at your throw ashis