Begin- I like the IN combination. Maybe bring in the top of the I in a little bit.
TAK- work on structure. Back to the basics.
Rank-the R is a little strange, but besides that, it's solid.
An altered form of my old throw.
Begin- I like the IN combination. Maybe bring in the top of the I in a little bit.
TAK- work on structure. Back to the basics.
Rank-the R is a little strange, but besides that, it's solid.
An altered form of my old throw.
Its a little fucked,yes.
Last edited by TrandomnesstwO; 07-30-2010 at 09:19 PM.
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Tak, make the main bar of the a the same width as the other letters. I would shorten the top right bar of the k for a bit of steez too but thats just me.
Begin, the b and e don't look like they fit, it might be cuz they're a bit smaller and the bars don't look as wide as the rest, try and tweak those. I'm feelin the g i n combo though.
Rese? you got your proportions right, try and clean it up and know exactly what shape you want your lines to be. Shorten the top bars of the s so its not so smooshed and dont stab the top of your e out so much, try an make all your letters more uniform with each other.
Ock, Make the o bigger and put more of a lip on the bottom of the top right bar of the k. The c is lookin hella clean minus that botch at the top lol good shit.
Last edited by MakeItTakeIt; 07-31-2010 at 09:18 PM.
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Originally Posted by weakfingers
Thanks man. I'm goin out soon so I'll put your advice to use.
how about a straight picture...
Fuck off.
Rese? you got your proportions right, try and clean it up and know exactly what shape you want your lines to be. Shorten the top bars of the s so its not so smooshed and dont stab the top of your e out so much, try an make all your letters more uniform with each other.
Ive been writing for three years and it all comes down to this. It says Rasp, thanks for the crits.
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My bad dude, I see the a now, it just doesn't really look like an a.. Not hatin, just obvservin.
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Jaep - I like that, simple but good
Bekone - I dont even have any advise, keep it up
anyways here is something i drew in about 10 mins. Crits are appreciated
your T looks like a 7 extend the bar
The only thing close to decent is the S. Go look at a shitload of throws and get a general idea. That doesn't look like a T, that doesn't look like an A, and I have no idea why a lot of people do their K's like that.
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But the owls are still around.
thanks man i think my 3D needs work and my style a little bit i just dont know what to do with im im in a rut with my pieces there all kiinda the same
its all good man it says ok and what do you mean less of everything?
i got a picture of my latest if you wanna check that out
Yo hommies no hate but can we keep this strictly throwie, and not piece. I mean painted throwies I PERFECTLY fine, but their is a thread where you can post your peices. Thanks
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In the context of this being a throwie thread, it's way overdone.
But pretty much in general there's a lot goin on. It is pretty clean, but I'd say tone it down and let your letters speak for themselves. A straight angle flix would help too lol.
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i didnt even notice i was on a throwie thread haha these are pieces shows how much iu was payin attention but hes a different one anyways
Same deal, this is probably just a personal preference, idk if anyone else is with me on this, but my favorite pieces are very minimalistic. It's the subtleties that make em pop, not 80 colors and 5 patterns. Once again, clean, but I'm not a fan. And what happened to the smurfs legs? lol
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hes crossing them
i agree with you that simplistic pieces do look good if you do them right but i love o dope 3 color fill with something to it man
It's not the colors, it's how ugly the piece itself is. Get your letter structure down before you do extensions, those are all hideous.
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