hanged my W a little, what you guys think?
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Willis you arent doing your 3D right
For a drop shadow just redraw your entire letter, but either left, down and to the left (or right, whatever).
Pick each point and redraw it down and to the _____. Your dropshadow is really messed up. (This same thing goes to ORIS from the top of this page)
Honestly i dont like the W the I or the L
Start with straighter lines then once you get some alright looking straight throws start curving that shit up
Today I'm just a lonely man tomorrow I'll be king.
Today I'm just a lonely man tomorrow I'll be king.
Today I'm just a lonely man tomorrow I'll be king.
@ Smokers
Yo thanks bro I haven't tried a del4sel throw until today so this is the first three. Surely more to come now that I know how to efficiently upload so we'll see where it ends. I was pretty surprised at that S too I think that's the most original thing i've ever done. Props to yours as well man that shit is fire! Post some more of those throws!!! Peace.
Today I'm just a lonely man tomorrow I'll be king.
For those that remember this battle... I liked this concept drawing and would like to work on improving it a bit because I think it has some potential.
Today I'm just a lonely man tomorrow I'll be king.
anybody wanna exchange?
i write rung
ehh.. not feeling the m.
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Lose the stars.
random bomb
get rekt - phill is right. but its also cool to say please
del4sel - looks pretty good. try to gain some more flow. and that 4 is killing me. but still it looks like your putting in work. props for that
Yo rung-Kind of sloppy I'm pretty tired if u want me to take another shot at it just let me know man. oh ya and on the 1st one I obviously fucked up the r so I had a better idea but idk what the hell went on with my hand and the G I was just freeballin' it and thot it would be "kewl" if I just made the top stretch a wee bit
••@del4sel, damn if those are you first attempts at it I applaud you man 'cause they got flow kind of but just aint clean. Like they're spaced perfectly you got the main idea of how the letter should be but u just need to fit it in nicely, like I don't like how the bottom of the S comes out over the 4 and the 4 look like Y's but pretty good I suck at #'s so I'm understand you on that man.
••@Scam-i would try and start with some like squarished beefed up keyboard letters for those letters like a JA style of throw simple and fresh!
••@Fuck the fame-first get ur letters all the same size man, then we'll see from there
nice crit man
i never really notice that too much
liking that bottom throw
the top one seems rushed
Crits?
LIHC.
i like the n man
maybe try making the rest of the c and e flow better
and it would be cool if the u wasnt so hidden
need som,e critssss. the D in my throw doesnt sit well with me. also, i need some 3d/shadow help...im not sure what direction would make the most sense for my vanishing point.
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