My first ever throw up
that shits fucking dope
connect the dots is giving me a seizure
random throwie. the u is a fatty haha
how wonderfully generic...the A needs work and the middle connection of the M too....apart from that its alright...add some special get rekt steez to it and make sure all the bottom parts of the throw are in proportion (aka the same size) aswell and it would be a banger
skam were u from thunderbay? if so hit me up :P
trying a new e maybe
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it doesn't flow with the rest
well, heres a throwie i just did...
keepin it simples..
oh yes, crits please.
Last edited by smile =(; 10-07-2010 at 02:38 PM.
okay this one kinda sucks. the s and c arent amazing but i feel like i can usually do those decent. i need somebody to give me some advice on how to make the a look less like an r. and how to make the m not suck.
Your M is an N, but for the A, just bring the round part all the way up to the cut
Moner- I liked your other M better, the e is too tall, and the hole in is should have an opening like in the O, but it's still dope.
Smile- That's pretty sick for Paint. Keep the dot above the i away from the L, and also, the L and E get really fat towards the end.
New stuff I'm messin with. Crit me please.
Smile, I don't like how the dot of the I is floating on the L. Also, try and make all your letters the same height and general proportions. Gettin there though, definitely keep at it.
Sbal, the second one down has the most potential, also its the only one with a halfway decent A. Definitely go simpler and clean it up though, I think it'd look way better. Just be careful not to make your letters bigger as you go unless it's on purpose and you can flow it.
sbal - whats up been a long while nice progression...
ra-that top left one is nice and clean with good flow diggin it
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