Mone- the n does kinda look like a k but otherwise its lookin pretty ill, got any painted?
critz..?
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Mone- the n does kinda look like a k but otherwise its lookin pretty ill, got any painted?
critz..?
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straight up and down like 6 o'clock
Yeah I figured the second green one looks the best... the N actually looks more like a N... I do Have one painted I will PM it to you...
“Always be yourself, express yourself, have faith in yourself, do not you go out and look for a successful personality an duplicate it.”
Took the advice and did a whole re-vamp. New name, etc.
Crits *more than* welcome
What does that even say bro???
“Always be yourself, express yourself, have faith in yourself, do not you go out and look for a successful personality an duplicate it.”
Gaze - Lowercase g and e.
throwie
Crits pls, no offensive shit.
You still gotta work on that D I think... It looks ALOT better than when you first showed me...
1 or 2? the capital E usually looks alot better, cocked that one up, and ignore those fya's lol
^^^^
http://www.flickr.com/photos/23657066@N07/2516971701/
http://www.flickr.com/photos/artfinder12-2/3795646168/
If you still want to write love, go with the top one, but work on the L.
They both look like pretty legit one liners to me... but the lowercase E is ringing a bell IMOOriginally Posted by AnonymousWaaa
1 or 2? the capital E usually looks alot better, cocked that one up, and ignore those fya's lol
“Always be yourself, express yourself, have faith in yourself, do not you go out and look for a successful personality an duplicate it.”
"Yo there is no escape!No recourse when I resort to forces of sorts reserved for bloodsports"
I'll stil write it, im a UK writer, and the name means alot more to me than just a nameand thanks for the crits, will keep working on it
stuck wtf do u write?! lol meyor here heri? nice throws either way....
mone i like that n from the last page, bring the split in the top to the left a bit and itll look less like a K i think...
some throwshit
heri- H needs work, the E in the left one is best, your capital Rs arent doing it, the lowercase one is good though. Your I is ok, needs work though.
nemor- bottom one looks a lot better. work on the M and put the R a little lower.
some of my first sketches.. i cant really give crits because i have just started and i wouldnt be able to give any thoughtful insight. im pretty sure both of these names are taken, but im more focused on learning and developing some sort of a style. Im having a hard time with letters like "R,I,B,V,G, and K" when i try a think, bubble style which i currently like most, any ideas? thank you!
you're off to a better start than most. You still suck, but you're not throwing arrows all over and shit. Basically keep doing this, and playing with different letter combos for a while. Go a little simpler on that M and lose the notch on the O.
crits?
Yo Void.. I would Void that throw and try to start more simple
Which letter?
void-keep all your letters simple and have a similar style lose the shines and color just practice your letters by doing outlines .
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