hahahah i knooo dude thanks though, im tryin to learn how to draw characters n shit
hahahah i knooo dude thanks though, im tryin to learn how to draw characters n shit
thanks boys, these are inspired by one of my favorite throwers, Korn.
any other crits besides zewl's.
gotta give crits to get em, so livid, u got something there, the idea's there you just need to fix it up a bit, just some modifications here and there and you basically got urself a decent throw.
I'm talkin bout the two lines that are going down from the top of both the s and a to their middles. don't make it touch their middles, let these 2 bits be part of the letters instead of having them look like they're just glued to em if u know what i mean.
make the line in the middle of the y run towards the middle of the 3 bars' intersection, and have the top right bar of the y be straight to match the s and a instead of it being wavy.
an uppercase e would look better too. or else just use a regular letter, no throw characters, coz it seems ure not good at em
keep gettin up man
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thanks phat thats sum legit critz i understand you when ur talkin about the middle lines touching the bottem and ill work on that but the Y is actually a T and i know the wavy shit is whack but ill keep workin it
Mone- looks good man but mabey cut out that little end on the N unless ur usin the E that you used on the green fill throw
Love- dont try the 3d shit yet just get down to basics with ur throw and use a marker
its drop shadow LIVID and a fine one at that
also solid one liner LOVE. I think you could come a little harder on the L and E
don't worry about doing it in marker pen is fine as long as you get a nice feel of it and are really consistent which I can tell you are
the added drip bubbles are unnecessary
this is my opinion so don't take it serious but i think you would be better off writing LOV cause imo LOVE is unoriginal
Or change the V to something else... Like a K... LOKE lol![]()
one of the first
I kinda like it except that the E could be a little closer, and a straight line in the D might look better
that looks boring dime, try a little bit of creativity than just primitive bubble letters
thanks guys!
gonna keep trying out some less boring boring letters, although I tried to play safe :P
i suck at throw ups i knokw..
this is fun, i get to fuck with r's.
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exi - dont sketch your throws jus let the pen flow
nose- that r i nasty and the rest of your regular letters are obviously solid
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the big red one crits? does anyone write SOIR?
Man that has got to be the stupidest looking "R" I have ever seen... LOL...
No but real talk. You should go check out the Throwups forum in the picture gallery... Try to find a really easy way to write right your letters and stick with it for awhile... It takes practice man but if you keep at it you will develop flow in no time
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