Throwies

[ribcage]

@ian yeah if you paint it big enough it should look aight

[ian]

Few new throwies, new S, tried to cut down on the overlapping, crits appreciated. idk why the last one turned out sideways

[H1P30N3R]

zewl got u a new crew JSC .. job security crew

[NosE2]

Hahaha that shit was in 07 but yeah....pretty hilarious....Stock cap fills for the win...not. My elmer cap clogged...and no more black for 3d or anything so this was just when i was waiting for my dude to get done with his piece

[smooth_nuts]

ze two letter looking nice,idk what that bird things about though....


kinda quit writing for a while so trying to get back into the flow of things before i go paint again...

old pic i found while loading the top ideas lol,just for shits and giggles,d for dope.

[smooth_nuts]

Yea, E's a little fat and work on the P. Also not feeling the circles for holes.

I think this ones better. thoughts?

bump,thats whats up im digging it alot.

[NosE2]

the Bird is my dude's character

[ian]

done for the most recent battle, crits?

[Sbal]

That S is not on it

[ian]

what do you mean by that? and i just realized i fucked up the E, i had a better one but i drew it wrong in that pic

[Flawless Victory]

Hahaha that shit was in 07 but yeah....pretty hilarious....Stock cap fills for the win...not. My elmer cap clogged...and no more black for 3d or anything so this was just when i was waiting for my dude to get done with his piece

Bump Far

[..romero..]

zewl.its horrible.i suggest you scrap it and go with something with more arrows and and a couple halo's too.

[JETZ]

better?
ignore the attempt at 3d, you can give me tips on shading for that too... I think its better than my last post, new "a"

[Block]

crits please

[ian]

@JETZ still looks bad my dude, the bottom of your first three letters are too small, and like all the stuff inside the letters is real small so they just look kinda like blobs. the r is awful, i dont even know what to say about that. throwies are all about obvserving and practicing. just try and look at as many pictures of throwies as you can, and work on your lettering. obviously dont bite, but once you look through enough youll understand how the letters are formed. youve got a long way to go with that

@block Not a fan, the B is alright but i dont like the little B in the middle, the L doesnt really look like anything, the square o doesnt fit with the rest of your letters, the curve in the top part of the c looks weird, and the K just doesnt look like a k very much. i see you were tryin to go for the emphasis on like a stretched upper half of the letters and you were tryin to make that wavy side go throughout, but i dont think it works to well for those letters. the L and K especially need more emphasis on their bottom halves, otherwise they dont look right. the handstyle isnt terrible though i like that k

[Block]

thanks ian yeah it was just my first attempt for Block because its a new name. ill work on some more styles soon

[JETZ]

@JETZ still looks bad my dude, the bottom of your first three letters are too small, and like all the stuff inside the letters is real small so they just look kinda like blobs. the r is awful, i dont even know what to say about that. throwies are all about obvserving and practicing. just try and look at as many pictures of throwies as you can, and work on your lettering. obviously dont bite, but once you look through enough youll understand how the letters are formed. youve got a long way to go with that

Thanks, I'll try and even out my letters more and maybe close out some space, try a different R and see what I come up with.

[Davo]

Jetz and Block, tbh I see real potential, i can't say much that ian hasn't already. Chin up and keep writing bro



Please flame the fuck out of that, tell me every detail you dislike about it and how I can better it.. I want to improve and I want people to be blunt, be constructive though.

[Sbal]

its angled wierd, the letters seem to get bigger, is that an N or an H, the A is eh, could work, and the C is massive.

[ian]

^what he said, definately work on keeping your letters evenly sized, idk if that first letter is an s or a c. if its an s bring that bottom part around more, if its a c lose that all together, second letter is just like a rounded square with 2 lines, thats no good, the a could be good if you work on it, make it more like puffy if you know what im saying, and bring it out more from behind that second letter, and i dont even know whats goin on with that last letter, its a gigantic blob type thing with a nondescript line runnin through it. shit needs major work bro