yeah man,painters touch berry pink is my favorite color paint.period.
yeah man,painters touch berry pink is my favorite color paint.period.
can u give me crits on my throwie pleasE?
no
shading suggests north lighting, which doesn't make much sense on a wall. Other then that your not gonna get much feedback for a super generic r and a
yeah,dont write ra,search ra one or raw one,he post on here and he's lightyears ahead of you...Originally Posted by illegal_drugs
RA haha thats wack
^ Lol. Not yet, man.
designing new throw up. this is what i got. not a huge fan. crits?
okae: your O is too simple compared to your K
RA: keep working... alot.
Sbal: your P doesn't work w. the flow, same with your S. but i dont think you seriously write that so i guess it doesn't matter
...it's an o.if its any thing but a circle(atleaste for a bomb) it looks wack imo
bottom page bump. and it doesn't flow if your O is just an O and your K is something good, and just bc the original letter is just a circle doesn't mean you can use that as an excuse.
designing new throw up. this is what i got. not a huge fan. crits?
okae: your O is too simple compared to your K
RA: keep working... alot.
Sbal: your P doesn't work w. the flow, same with your S. but i dont think you seriously write that so i guess it doesn't matter
does it say safe? i like the s but your outline comes hella close to itself on the bottom there. f and e look the same, middle part of e should be a tad bit wider, and make the middle part of the f more a circle instead of an oval and that throw would be solid
edit- you really gettin on that ***** bout his O? How much can you really do to the structure of a throw O? especially when its the first letter
Last edited by ribcage; 01-26-2011 at 10:34 PM.
...So i dont know about flow??
i just got off a graffiti break,paintings a little dusty i know that
but i dont flow?
thumbs up: K in the orange one, A in the green one, A in the hollow one
@Safe: DAAAAAAMN. That throw is looking REAL hurt, dude.
Scrap it, ASAP.
The loop at the bottom of the S is horrid, and makes its structure look worse IMO. Those random tumors on the edge of the E need to go too.
I know what you were going for with the tumor, but that shit deads the flows IMO. You did the same thing on the S, which created dead space between the top of the SA. If you're going to do one of those things, make it taller to avoid creating dead space. Keep practicing, nigguh.
Also, it's ironic that you're doggin' someone else's flow when their throws shit on yours. Just sayin'.
went over one of my old throws, i havent changed styles, so i just threw it upside down since its the same throw. its weird working from right to left. peep that ugly hand
looks clean for being a little more challenging to you weed ... I think im goin to try my name upside down then backwards im a lefty it might work out easier for me.
thats true, my boy is a lefty and he writes his hands from right to left, he says its easier. i think im going to do my shit upside down here and there from now on. i like seeing hands upside down, why not some throws too?
my man ok coming with the HEAT
show em whats up brotha
okae, nah wasn't meaning to talk shit or say you don't flow, i was just saying that IMO it looks a little weird cause your K is so fresh and then your O is almost boring compared to it, idk, it looks fine when you look at the whole throw, it just seemed that way on the "OK" throw but im awful at throws so i can't really say much. i've already worked through mad throws and i already have simple ones, im just trying to put some flavor on it.
practice, im prob trying too hard...
and don't try to play me as a complete toy just cause i suck at throws
safe you def have talent
i think throws look dope when each letter is unique
but the word still caries the same style
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