that's fucked up dude
more crits on throwies from my book
Kiddy: I aint feelin it . all letters look the same .
lemme get some critss
Reup: i wanted to have my letters keep the same style...your throwie looks like a little kid did it, if ur gonna put some of the letters on a angle(H,y,D) do it for the rest (R,O)
BOTH of your throws look like little kids did it.
Just so you know, doggie.
awww man its not as bad as hydro
Yeah, and herpes isn't as bad as AIDS.
lol well gimme some crits n not mention my case of aids
Quit trying to make all of the letters look the same.
They look different on purpose, they aren't the same letter.
Work more on making your throw work as a whole, not individual uniformity.
Kibby: The one in the first picture with the drips is the best is the only thing I can say
Hydro: That is absolutely horrible. Almost as bad as my shit when I first started. First of all, that's not even a throwie, it's more of a shitty piece. Go to flickr, and look at pictures of throwies. HUNDREDS AND HUNDREDS of pictures. For crits though: GO SIMPLE! Your bars are TOTALLY horrible, your lines curve in and out everywhere. Make all of your letters the same size and angle. Make all of your lines the same width. Ditch the shitty arrow extension on the Y, and lose the one on the right side of the H too. Your D... Look at a D please. The bottom of a D does not go outwards, it comes back in. That's not a D. The R is the worst. It looks the your first Y, but upside down. Therefor shittier. Your O is whatever. It's simple, however all your lines are still crooked as fuck. DRAW STRAIGHT LINES! Your 3D is off just about everywhere. Ditch ass the colors and fills, and get your shit down before wasting ink. Once again go simple. Need inspiration? Look at your damn keyboard.
Edited: Width not length
PS you spelling BOMBING SCIENCE wrong
God damn . I asked for crits and i got them . lmfao . Idk how im gonna fix it .
You have the amazing power of adderall to thank for that my friend. Don't give up. Have fun with it.
You can sell it to me and also make money.
How many do you want , for how much .
I'd much rather have adderall than xanax