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    i need some crits please
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    that looks bad bro... The space left open between each letter makes it look ugly. the "I" looks like two turds start over plese... I like your idea with the E though

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    aite. thanks again.

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    sorry ..one more
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    i think the last is the best , but i dont like the bottom of the R, i like that you made the letters like the same height i think the others would look better if the J and R were the same height

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    Quote Originally Posted by Sbal View Post
    Since you asked. I dont like the lines that arent attached, you know the ones that fuck everything up when you go to fill in MS paint. The E and A could use a little more definition as well. Maybe try to line up the mid line of the e with a line in the S to get a little more symmetry at the beginning and end. Last but not least Binary Star is dope, and Senim Silla's solo album is killer

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    alright made the letters the same size and added a kinda reverse semitry to that last throw up
    i think its time to start bombing again n im thinking keeping both throw ups
    any opinions
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    Jrone? really? ...
    I like the one that you posted on the page before better, where they weren't connect. My crit, do that one while improving on the one's above by adding some... flair. i think that's the word i'm looking for..

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    feel free to crit :]
    thnx luvvies
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    ^thats just terrible, sloppy as fuck, looks like RAIBR cant even tell what that middle letter is supposed to be

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    Just Reckless
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    take my word and stick with the one on the left JR, it is the tits... just add 2 dots between the J and the R to give a hint of the J's back line so that the two letters dont get confused for one big W
    peace son hope this helps

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    word, im not feeling the R on the right at all, the one on the left is nice and clean.

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    shit i dip this section for 2 pages and now this man has a fresh throw, jrone use that one liner trust

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    Quote Originally Posted by H1P30N3R View Post
    a bit messy but is the overall style working for me ?
    bump for improvement
    your killing it man

    JRONE - lets see that full name

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    improvement? keep rollin.

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    yeah your I looks like a straight up S, your A is a replia of your R, looks like RRSBR lmao. that style isnt workin for you at all, try more simple defined bubble letters
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    exchanges for my crewmates hope and zeal

    crits?



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    i used to rock a z similar to that. maybe try to close the space between the e and a. on hope the P kind of looks like a lowercase r, and the H is a style different than the rest, probably because your used to doin that H. it all looks clean though. heres somethin i did real quick for hipe. i try to do shit with O's but I suck at it

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    i agree with all that except for the lower case R looking P... im not seeing the resemblance :P unless it's a REALLLLLY shitty lower case r dude, and u know im better than doing a lower case r as shitty as this one hahahahaha
    but thanks for the crits dude.

    btw, i cant see any of your images anymore
    there's a frog in an ice cube instead and says Domain Unregistered. To view, register at: bit.ly/imageshack-domain

    am I the only one seeing this?

    and more crits are appreciated

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    yea idk i mean i have pics up in the tags thread and they can see em


 

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