i need some crits please
that looks bad bro... The space left open between each letter makes it look ugly. the "I" looks like two turds start over plese... I like your idea with the E though
i think the last is the best , but i dont like the bottom of the R, i like that you made the letters like the same height i think the others would look better if the J and R were the same height
alright made the letters the same size and added a kinda reverse semitry to that last throw up
i think its time to start bombing again n im thinking keeping both throw ups
Jrone? really? ...
I like the one that you posted on the page before better, where they weren't connect. My crit, do that one while improving on the one's above by adding some... flair. i think that's the word i'm looking for..
could use a little leveling.
feel free to crit :]
Last edited by Ridiculous; 02-28-2011 at 05:20 AM.
^thats just terrible, sloppy as fuck, looks like RAIBR cant even tell what that middle letter is supposed to be
take my word and stick with the one on the left JR, it is the tits... just add 2 dots between the J and the R to give a hint of the J's back line so that the two letters dont get confused for one big W
peace son hope this helps
word, im not feeling the R on the right at all, the one on the left is nice and clean.
shit i dip this section for 2 pages and now this man has a fresh throw, jrone use that one liner trust
improvement? keep rollin.
exchanges for my crewmates hope and zeal
i used to rock a z similar to that. maybe try to close the space between the e and a. on hope the P kind of looks like a lowercase r, and the H is a style different than the rest, probably because your used to doin that H. it all looks clean though. heres somethin i did real quick for hipe. i try to do shit with O's but I suck at it
i agree with all that except for the lower case R looking P... im not seeing the resemblance :P unless it's a REALLLLLY shitty lower case r dude, and u know im better than doing a lower case r as shitty as this one hahahahaha
but thanks for the crits dude.
btw, i cant see any of your images anymore
there's a frog in an ice cube instead and says Domain Unregistered. To view, register at: bit.ly/imageshack-domain
am I the only one seeing this?
and more crits are appreciated
yea idk i mean i have pics up in the tags thread and they can see em