peso - dont be afraid to loosen up and develop your letters. that P is solid. now make your s have some stye. and work on that drop shadow. try shooting it to the bottom of the throw. it might give it a little depth. lol and id ditch the little lines around the p and o. i dont think they work
peso, you're progressing, but your letters look too uptight... just flowwwww them mayn
let your hand run smoothly and more liquid like on the paper, let your wrist move... allow your lines to be more organic
will do ...the p was the only letter I really liked. I'll be shootin for them "organic" lines lol
Last edited by H1P30N3R; 02-26-2011 at 06:45 AM.
looks nice man
a lower case e might help with that style
after that just keep doing them and always try to compare to what people above you are doing
bump
I like it sbane besides your s just dont dig it looks like a s not bubble letterd
shaky as hell, A is too overlapped, K looks like an N
Peso - your P has blocky bits while the rest of your letters are round. Maybe try to shape the bottoms of your letter so they are more like the P. The E would look better if you divide the middle bar so it is doubling back. If that makes sense. I also think you should just do a drop shadow, not the sorta 3-d esque drop shadow you've got going on now
Jakro - K is no good, why didnt you put holes in your letters? even just like a single line or scrunched line for a hole? Anything! And its shaky because the lines are shaky... Harlem shakes are your worst enemy when painting.
got anything for me?
a bit messy but is the overall style working for me ?
that S is seriously hurtin, the O looks like a D, and the E aint lookin too hot either, especially the bottom left thing u put on it. and you should get rid of the little sliver pieces you put at the top of the e and s for now cause they lookin weak as well.
You should stick with bottom of the S u did like 10 posts up, that O too
this isnt bad, make the bottom of the J a little smaller and either bring the top down some or bring the r up a little so theyre more evenOriginally Posted by jrone
i need some crits please
that looks bad bro... The space left open between each letter makes it look ugly. the "I" looks like two turds start over plese... I like your idea with the E though
aite. thanks again.
sorry ..one more
i think the last is the best , but i dont like the bottom of the R, i like that you made the letters like the same height i think the others would look better if the J and R were the same height
Since you asked. I dont like the lines that arent attached, you know the ones that fuck everything up when you go to fill in MS paint. The E and A could use a little more definition as well. Maybe try to line up the mid line of the e with a line in the S to get a little more symmetry at the beginning and end. Last but not least Binary Star is dope, and Senim Silla's solo album is killer
bump
alright made the letters the same size and added a kinda reverse semitry to that last throw up
i think its time to start bombing again n im thinking keeping both throw ups
any opinions
Jrone? really? ...
I like the one that you posted on the page before better, where they weren't connect. My crit, do that one while improving on the one's above by adding some... flair. i think that's the word i'm looking for..
could use a little leveling.
feel free to crit :]
thnx luvvies
Last edited by Ridiculous; 02-28-2011 at 05:20 AM.
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