^thats just terrible, sloppy as fuck, looks like RAIBR cant even tell what that middle letter is supposed to be
^thats just terrible, sloppy as fuck, looks like RAIBR cant even tell what that middle letter is supposed to be
Just Reckless
Justifiable Racking
Junior Reins
Just Run
take my word and stick with the one on the left JR, it is the tits... just add 2 dots between the J and the R to give a hint of the J's back line so that the two letters dont get confused for one big W
peace son hope this helps
word, im not feeling the R on the right at all, the one on the left is nice and clean.
shit i dip this section for 2 pages and now this man has a fresh throw, jrone use that one liner trust
bump for improvementOriginally Posted by H1P30N3R
a bit messy but is the overall style working for me ?
your killing it man
JRONE - lets see that full name
improvement? keep rollin.
yeah your I looks like a straight up S, your A is a replia of your R, looks like RRSBR lmao. that style isnt workin for you at all, try more simple defined bubble letters
exchanges for my crewmates hope and zeal
crits?
i used to rock a z similar to that. maybe try to close the space between the e and a. on hope the P kind of looks like a lowercase r, and the H is a style different than the rest, probably because your used to doin that H. it all looks clean though. heres somethin i did real quick for hipe. i try to do shit with O's but I suck at it
i agree with all that except for the lower case R looking P... im not seeing the resemblance :P unless it's a REALLLLLY shitty lower case r dude, and u know im better than doing a lower case r as shitty as this one hahahahaha
but thanks for the crits dude.
btw, i cant see any of your images anymore
there's a frog in an ice cube instead and says Domain Unregistered. To view, register at: bit.ly/imageshack-domain
am I the only one seeing this?
and more crits are appreciated
yea idk i mean i have pics up in the tags thread and they can see em
nose its a peso day for you killin my name ...it is good inspiration for me tho feelin that p
take buddys advice with the two dots in between the j and r, it's not instantly recognizable.
but yeah that's fresh man
try and make your p and o like the rest, make all the tops have the same style
got you but I do like adding the e like you suggested
Last edited by elesdee; 02-28-2011 at 12:04 PM.
Vok- Those letters dont flow. The red K is a completely different style. And try putting them closer together.
Fube- the lowercase jr looks way better. Work on the top of the r though.
Phat- Feeling the H in that Hope throwy
Eles- I agree with Norf, bring the letters closer together and scrap the K. I also think you should focus more on finding an O that flows rather than decorating it. You know?
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