I missed PESO day, so I made a quick contribution. Should've made the top of the P a bit bigger, but oh well. Lazy styles.
pesoes just has a nice flow and of course your hands are clean
Alright here's the throwie I've been working on. I wrote it out a million times... still dont like it. But I'm ready for some crits.
these r my 2 official throw ups .. thanks to every one who helped me develope my throw ups i fn appreciate it
now its time to start bombing again so im prob not going to be posting again till i try doing some pieces
thanks for the update on your officialness
first flick needs more flow, you need to lose the dot over the j everywhere, the n and e aren't good enough
second throw in second flick sucks ass.
we tell you over and over again. the first one in the second flick is the keeper. just lose the dot
agreed the uppercase r is kinda wack lowercase looks sick
new throw in need of crits please and thanks
I'd been fooling around on paper, and toyed (emphasis on toy) around with throw designs, but after reading some threads on the site, I took the knowledge I gained and tried applying it to this in my chill spot. I would appreciate all the suggestions, I eventually filled in the metallic barrier at the top of "11" so that's all yellow now. As a writer, what would be some steps you would take towards improving the overall feel of this?
exchange wit hekler a while back
Last edited by ntn; 03-03-2011 at 11:56 PM.
mipe i like it, e seems too wide
Dark, that tumor on the right side of the painted R is too big
@Mipe I personally like the yellow throw better than the blue one you posted later, I think the 'm' is more legible in the yellow than the blue. The 'e' with the tongue made me smile
@Alias I like the highlighting on your numbers, but the misshapen 0 really bugs me. In your chill spot, where I assume you're not liable to be caught easily, you could have taken your time to make sure all the numbers were shaped evenly.
Last edited by jypsy; 03-04-2011 at 04:53 AM.
yee mark fix up the top right bar of the K then go destroyy
im starting to regulate this thread a bit more. heres a few guidlines on what i would like to see catch on.
- no excessive crits without a bump to the next page, or if your posting crits along with your own work.
- small props like "thats good shit" ect... are fine with no bump, as long as its on the same page. make sure to address the post you want tho, by the screen name or name in work.
- if you dont like a sketch then there is no need to post hate about it. unless your posting some of your work with the hate.
- if your post got deleted and you feel you deserve it to be here then pm me your bitching, dont post it in the thread.
the idea here is to get as many flicks as possible with as little talk as possible.