u need to work on shadow, u should think of it this way, make pretend the letters are real and there sitting directly in front of a wall about idk maybe a foot from it and decide where the sun is, now picture the shadow hitting the wall, if u can picture that in your head then you can see where the shadows should be.
And remember that ur shadow lines should match your letter, straight where your letter is straight and curved where your letter is curved
shitty fill crits plz
3D and i think u should do away with the dots
the bottom of your R looks like a ballsack and the dots in your e r and p look like nipples. hahahahahaOriginally Posted by OZON
shitty fill crits plz
i hate both of these but fuck it. was trying a cap e on the top one obviously(sorry bout the sideways im to lazy to retake the pic)
The caps E is way better but still think the dots gotta go
im not sure what to put can seem to get anything that i like (dot wise)
try-lines,stars,swirls,letters,peace signs,anything really.i dont honestly think its the dot aspect,its making that dot a circle instead of a dot.
sorry about this im super bord and will try some new things n upload them in a bit
keep that s and e you have and get to work tweaking your other letters,right meow!
Exactly, S and E stay the other letters go, and the X's deff look better than the dots, your on the right track
Seriously though i want advice on this
taro its lookin solid
There u go Slerp, it kinda sucks but idk
idk what your other one is
but the 1 you posted doesnt really have much flavor in my oppinion
on the top one ignore my shadowin the secound 1 im really not feelin my r
webs and mr.late
please keep your chat to a minimum or in each other's inboxes or take it to the chat thread
and if you MUST speak, either accompany your posts with flicks, or bunch up all you have to say in one post instead of flooding the thread
thanks yo
No problem Phat, and Slerp on the second one im not feeling the R or the P, but SLE are ok
Last edited by webs508; 04-07-2011 at 01:39 AM.
anybetter
Hi, so I know for a fact I am toy as fuck.
PLEASE CRIT ME. Easiest was to get better is to know why your shit, eh?
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