^ you should just keep the hash lines on the H straight, instead of the top one coming down on the left, makes it look weird
thanks for the crits
soar - you REALLY have to keep the same proportion throughout the throwup, and the pentagram is kinda weird
humr - i like the bottom the most. youre definitely improving. work on your handstyle too
reks - work on structure, take keyboard letters and just fatten them up before you go on to anything else. use bars
terf - steal cans unless you aren't willing to accept the consequences if you're caught. if you dont want to do that just get those shitty dollar cans from walmart and practice in your backyard on a piece of plywood, make sure to turn the can upside down and let some pressure out beforehand or else it will drip like mad
changed the j, straightened out the t, and made the r's legs beefier. crits are appreciated
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thats more of a simp/straight letter than it is a throw...
crit hard ...it says COOQY if im bad
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Hey bruv, to me the 'C' looks too much like a 'V'.
JESTR your pink one is better, every letter was better in the pink one.
It looks like a sick bomb, you could definitely get some serious ups with that. Go big or go home.
Work on keeping your curvy bits in the S and E, and defining the T and R better (like in the pink one)
I would also say work on the J, make it more like the bottom of your S.
cooq get out of here...you told me your throwies were good at school... centry sams got that hot shit...jestr its all good but the j an r are the weakest
jestr, I like
keep at it bro... ure headin in the right direction
now I'd like to see you give your letter some more buff, some more fat if u know wht i mean... and more flow
trying to stay away from the normal bubble letters, thoughts?
^Not really feeling it. Maybe try a different approach to non-bubble letter throwies.
mindtrix-does that read ELBUR if so i think the l and the r need work in the bomb
Yes sir, trying out a different name, though I haven't dropped the other one just yet.
Yeah, I figured I'd have to alter the rest of the throw because the only thing I've changed is adding an "E" and dropping "Wi".
word well i like the tag but the L needs a lil work
been workin with this style for awhile now any crits on wut could change it up
the s is a keeper, just flow it betta
guud looks man and by the way that book cover is dope