JESTR your pink one is better, every letter was better in the pink one.
It looks like a sick bomb, you could definitely get some serious ups with that. Go big or go home.
Work on keeping your curvy bits in the S and E, and defining the T and R better (like in the pink one)
I would also say work on the J, make it more like the bottom of your S.
any better?
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cooq get out of here...you told me your throwies were good at school... centry sams got that hot shit...jestr its all good but the j an r are the weakest
jestr, I like
keep at it bro... ure headin in the right direction
now I'd like to see you give your letter some more buff, some more fat if u know wht i mean... and more flow
props mayn
trying to stay away from the normal bubble letters, thoughts?
^Not really feeling it. Maybe try a different approach to non-bubble letter throwies.
mindtrix-does that read ELBUR if so i think the l and the r need work in the bomb
Yes sir, trying out a different name, though I haven't dropped the other one just yet.
Yeah, I figured I'd have to alter the rest of the throw because the only thing I've changed is adding an "E" and dropping "Wi".
word well i like the tag but the L needs a lil work
been workin with this style for awhile now any crits on wut could change it up
the s is a keeper, just flow it betta
guud looks man and by the way that book cover is dope
I agree with phat, that S is definetly a keeper. I liked your book cover phat, also congrats on becoming a moderator.
focused mainly on the j and r this time
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Last edited by Task977; 04-19-2011 at 07:26 PM.
the j definatly needs work but its coming together
I just cant get it Dx
Anyone wanna sketch some J's that i can fuck with to get an idea for my throwie?
@task again i think thats more of a straight letter/simple than it is a throw-up... oh and start doin the bottoms of your letters, if your like me I like to bring everything i paint to the ground, so i do the same shit when i sketch but in order to develop letters on paper you gotta do the bottoms.... it helps
I know all the last throws of mine i posted all look practically the same, but i aint got any new throw styles at the moment
tried to do it i kinda messed up on the r but maybe it will help you out couldnt really figure the j out so i just kinda sketched it into a simple
im just having troubles with the k idk if i wanna spell it klover or clover or what.....i love the word but i dont know
judge......
Last edited by Phat 2; 04-20-2011 at 08:04 AM.
^dope, kick that L out a little more, the kick looks too dinky
i think my previous was much better, but here ya go ribs. My first attempt at a "real throwup"
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thanks klove, I like the third pic you posted
Last edited by Phat 2; 04-20-2011 at 08:08 AM.
@klove that 3rd pics K is prime breh
@task o yup, that J is dope, try to take some of the negative space inbetween the R's legs
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