I'm chill as a cucumber, man.
Vaginalexplosion lol put something inside of the U to distinguish it as a U and not a V. Do something else with the P to make it look less like an E. Lose the the bar that makes it look like an E.
damn you a grimy motherfucka
I would just stick to Sove if I were you. Its a nice throw. Better than soup anyways.
first time i try a throw crits please
why is there only 3D on the bottom?
and why do you have your short shorts crotch on the paper?
Ⓖⓞⓣ ⓝⓞⓣⓗⓘⓝⓖ ⓞⓝ ⓣⓗⓔ ⓝⓐⓚⓔⓓ ⓝⓘⓖⓖⓐ ⓘⓝ ⓣⓗⓔ ⓗⓐⓝⓓⓢⓣⓨⓛⓔ ⓑⓐⓣⓣⓛⓔ ⓣⓗⓡⓔⓐⓓ
my crotch aside, crits on the actual throw, and im fixing the whole 3d only at bottom thing right now i didnt realize it
EDIT: added 3d at top now please crit
Last edited by Mc Satan; 08-08-2011 at 08:41 AM.
not diggin the big hole in the P. i feel like your individual letters are too spread out.
the big hole in the P is ugly, and that dot in the dot of the i is weird but it has something!
did these 2 while waiting to pay some bills so they are a bit sloppy, just posting them to see if letter type and placement are better this time. also decided to do a lower case E on one of them to see how it looks like
youre basically doing more straight letters, just shittily proportioned. go on flickr or google or this forum and look up some throws
gonna try a few more but before i do, quick question should i stick to lower case E or capital?
depends on what you like. Go peep game at the throwie battle thread and look at what a good throw looks like. If you still dont know after that, go look at nouveaup's posts
i went through the past 30 or 40 pages of this thread i think i got a better idea here are 2 i just did, please crit and tell me which one is better if any. ill then work on that one and do a better version