modified the first one to a different style kind of.
Overall, I'd like to hear what you think.
modified the first one to a different style kind of.
Overall, I'd like to hear what you think.
I prefer the first one tbh.Originally Posted by Lado
modified the first one to a different style kind of.
Overall, I'd like to hear what you think.
It is impossible to keep a straight face in the presence of one or more kittens. ~Cynthia E. Varnado
So do I man, I like the S and K. But the modified was only another example of what to work with, kind of fit the style I've been seeing. I think I may be sticking with the 1st one.
Chill, the swirl in the S (first pic) screams toy IMO, make sure not to have any shit like that in your throw, at least not yet. As for the rest of the the throw, it's boring. I think the second one has the most appeal; work with that. One more thing, you seem to have a problem with your letter spacing, it looks like the letters after the first letter are too tucked into the previous one. Give them a little more breathing space.
Oh, almost forgot, one golden rule: don't sketch your throw, you wouldn't sketch it with paint, would you? Of course not.
Besides, the only thing worth sketching with paint/a pencil/a pen is a piece.
Keep it up.
Ibu, which letters, of the 2 throws, would you say are the best ones and should be carried on or played with? I'm kind of fond of the "L K" in the 1st one. But of course, that's coming from my toy perspective.
El bumpitoSorry for posting the same throw, just trying to get some crits.
Sulk, I'd pick the S and U from the second one and the L and K from the first.
Last edited by MN Nice; 08-19-2011 at 11:58 AM.
Crits welcomed ^_^
Ewal - Your throw should all flow with each other letter.
lado - I personally like the top better(minus the swirl)
mm - I would just bring down the top right side of the S down just a tad.
Well, in my opinion, the entire throw in the second one is better than the entire throw first one. The K in the first one looks droopy, and non-flowing, for lack of a better term. Work with everything in the second throw. Remember to give your letter breathing space.
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^god damn your throws and hands are ugly. the STOMP one is the only one that I can look at without being annoyed... Try simpling em up a bit, because the slight complexity your tryin to put on those letters look terrible. Work on hand movements and cleanliness with simpler letters, then if you really want come back to this style and fuck with it.
i strongly disagree. nothing wrong with these throws at all. they flow real nice.
the handstyle, yeah it needs work. but the throws are great, nothing's ever perfect. but they DEF aren't ugly !
theyre not clean, their inconsistant, and they are most definetly ugly. If I saw them in high traffic+high graffiti area location id chose him to cover in a heartbeat
to each his own opinion i guess
I'm with Phat on this one, I like em.
@ ribcage ,,, i dont understand u ... iv only posted on this site a few times .. every time uv commented on any my flicks its been hate ..
but thats ok .. im used to that much like all of us ... but i do agree with u that my hands are ugly and some of the throws are wack but not ALL of them .. i put alot of time into my throws and for u to degrade my work pisses me off ...soo say something constructive soo u dont like such a fag . even if ur the best graff artist ever to be put on earth . if thats ur attitude then i belive u are wack . deemed to be road kill ......
but anyways why dont ya post one of these SICK ASS STEAZY throws u claim to be soo good at there captin
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ribcage is bullshitin on this one. the Humr throws are good, keep writin em.
Your throws have potential, but that doesnt make them good. Maybe its the picture quality that makes em look dirty... but Im sure that your throws are on the same level as your tags. THe lines on your throws look sketched out, not one clean line.
No need to get butthurt and start saying I think I know everything, I apologize for being too blunt with you, didnt know it was gonna hurt your feewings.
so I guess in your eyes I dont know throws, but how can someone that dont know throws tell someone else about throws?! pandamonium. Stop assuming you know anything
Last edited by ribcage; 08-24-2011 at 01:05 PM.
new shit lol
rib was so wrong, i love those throws.
It is impossible to keep a straight face in the presence of one or more kittens. ~Cynthia E. Varnado
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