D and T, pronounce them both more. For your T you should have both triangle parts on it to make it no doubt a T ya digg? right now it looks like a carrot or a C. Also dont put that 3d on the U thats over the T
Him shading that part in actually matches the dropshadow he laid out, 'cause that would have been where the T came down. Further, as we all know, if it's shown, a dropshadow needs to worked in, if applicable.
Also, I think I know what you wrote before what you write right now, Debut.
Your steez has definitely improved, props.
A few gripes with it, though:
1. The E is huuurt. Make it a simple one, 'cause it would imo, compliment the rest of the throw. Idk, maybe throw in a u as the eye.
2. Idk, that little notch on the top of the B looks out of place, scrap that.
3. Look around for inspiration on D's 'cause I think it would add a bit more spark to your throw; your D's a bit boring. Ohhh, make the dot on the bottom right part of your D, maybe add another U as the eye, or do one of those Augor hole things.
Just my two cents, 'cause I think I see what style you're attempting.
Yeah, add the triangle thing like Reach suggested too.
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thanks ill work on it
ewal just keep practicing that thro. the more u do it the more ull structure each letter.
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is it just me or do we have some real similar throw styles?
I kinda looked at that flick and went "SHIT, I do not remember drawing these!" heh.
for crits, maybe practice your hand movements to make em more fluid so that you dont get none of those shakey lines no more. you can get with some good flows once your lines are nice and clean
thanks man. yea i seen a different flick of urs nd noticed some similarities.
yea my problem is gettin each letter to b the same size (not go small to big) nd the shakeyness too
but based on that..which s is more solid? top or bottom?
i think the bottom is the better toss .... but both are nice .. good work
new name...jerm,germ i know the hand style sucks but lmk bout the throw
but it can be mistaken for a C... careful
Definitely stick with Lado.
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Trying to get back with this shit now that I'm done with court . I'm a bit rusty but I've been fuckin with 'erf'. Excuse it being backwards, I don't know how to flip it on my new mac.
Lado, don't sketch throws. Do em in one line smoothly. your 3d is looking ok, try to be a little more precise though. In the SU the s needs work, the bottom left section is cutting up too high. For the Lado one try some lowercase letters.
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