Throwies

[MASE P_2s]

yea this is old i changed it to a sn

[MASE P_2s]

crits snag
snag ekul throwy p2s by CantTouchSociety, on Flickr

this is my new one

[ERAYS]

The E is fairly solid, but every other letter falls off. the R could be confused for an A, and just has odd shapes in it in general. The A isn't really much of a letter. The Y looks like an S and the S is just odd. I wouldn't do those weird squiggle lines either. Keep at it. Keep it simple for now. The ERAYS hand at the bottom isn't too bad, again minus the squiggles. Stay up.

thanks for the crits! I personally dont like the A either and yea the R and S need work but IMO the y just needs some work on its structure and proportions but thats just me...

[LIZARD]

something quick i need some ideas for my throw R, its looks forced idk i can't figure it out...dont mind the ahhhh piss above it that was my buddy and i got bored so i added drips cuz we all now they look better on paper lol lmk what ya think

[Strange Journeys]

http://www.flickr.com/photos/62118673@N04/6158397880/

another fway spot, all sloppy
im not really feeling that yo, make all the letters similar to the e

[skinaone]

this is my new one

i like the old S waaayyy better

[skinaone]

the last one is my original throw the others are jus fooling around now CRIT MY SHET

[EWL24]

skina - the second one is the best, i dont like how the bottom leg of the S goes all the way up, and on the other two the holes in the letters are to big

crits please

[skinaone]

^^^ coming from you?
comeone guys anyone?

[LIZARD]

skina:whats up with the lines that r in the shadow, is it supposed to be a highlight cuz those would be on the opposite side of the shadow i think...either way i think u should ditch em all and leave just plain black

give crits to get crits, just cuz u don't like his shit doesn't mean he can't tell u what he thinks u need to change,

[EWL24]

fuck you skina u asked for crits so i gave them to u, just cause my throw sucks doesn't mean i cant improve it, you always put up the same thing and it never looks any better

[LIZARD]

rough draft, i think i wanna take the lower part of the s and put it behind the curve a little instead of infront...crits

ewal: maybe make the bottom half of ur e one long curve instead of makin it go up and back down again. put a shadow or something on it to give it some life

[vems]

any crits please? besides the poor line quality, this was done quickly at work lol

[Kostonee]

Vemsone I like it man, make the lines cleaner and sharpen the top of the V and it'll be nice bro

[vems]

ya no doubt i just threw it together in 2 mins while i was on a call at work, ima re do it with color tonight

[Phat 2]

skina, the second throw is the best, the other two have wide spread legs, and suck. exactly like prostitutes. if you wouldn't want your throws to be prostitutes you'd do like the second flick and close those spaces up

[bak]

bump that ewal, only clean shit on this page.
vems work on ur tag nd the e hole looks odd. the v would look more soilid if the left arm was a solid line instead of the lil curves.
seyr? keep practicing that throw, looks solid.
skina that shitty generic style is played out. give crits nt pussy lips.

[skinaone]

fuck you skina u asked for crits so i gave them to u, just cause my throw sucks doesn't mean i cant improve it, you always put up the same thing and it never looks any better

lol some one got mad
***** how do i post the same shit ?
and i havent been on this shit in over 2 months and you didnt even write that long ago gtf
and i feel you phat
SEVR or SEYR that e is nice and the Y the S is bad and R too try flowing them better with the other ones work on your tagg btw

[skinaone]

fuck you skina u asked for crits so i gave them to u, just cause my throw sucks doesn't mean i cant improve it, you always put up the same thing and it never looks any better

lol some one got mad
***** how do i post the same shit ?
and i havent been on this shit in over 2 months and you didnt even write that long ago gtf
and i feel you phat
SEVR or SEYR that e is nice and the Y the S is bad and R too try flowing them better with the other ones work on your tagg btw

[MN Nice]

Crits yo!