yea this is old i changed it to a sn
yea this is old i changed it to a sn
Originally Posted by TheToy
this is my new one
thanks for the crits! I personally dont like the A either and yea the R and S need work but IMO the y just needs some work on its structure and proportions but thats just me...
something quick i need some ideas for my throw R, its looks forced idk i can't figure it out...dont mind the ahhhh piss above it that was my buddy and i got bored so i added drips cuz we all now they look better on paper lol lmk what ya think
http://www.flickr.com/photos/62118673@N04/6158397880/
another fway spot, all sloppy
im not really feeling that yo, make all the letters similar to the e
i like the old S waaayyy better
the last one is my original throw the others are jus fooling around now CRIT MY SHET
skina - the second one is the best, i dont like how the bottom leg of the S goes all the way up, and on the other two the holes in the letters are to big
crits please
^^^ coming from you?
comeone guys anyone?
skina:whats up with the lines that r in the shadow, is it supposed to be a highlight cuz those would be on the opposite side of the shadow i think...either way i think u should ditch em all and leave just plain black
give crits to get crits, just cuz u don't like his shit doesn't mean he can't tell u what he thinks u need to change,
Last edited by LIZARD; 09-19-2011 at 09:40 PM.
fuck you skina u asked for crits so i gave them to u, just cause my throw sucks doesn't mean i cant improve it, you always put up the same thing and it never looks any better
rough draft, i think i wanna take the lower part of the s and put it behind the curve a little instead of infront...crits
ewal: maybe make the bottom half of ur e one long curve instead of makin it go up and back down again. put a shadow or something on it to give it some life
any crits please? besides the poor line quality, this was done quickly at work lol
Last edited by vems; 09-21-2011 at 01:37 PM.
VEMSONE
Vemsone I like it man, make the lines cleaner and sharpen the top of the V and it'll be nice bro
Anything I say or post on this website is a LIE I don't commit Vandalism and will never agree with Vandalism, Art however is a different story
ya no doubt i just threw it together in 2 mins while i was on a call at work, ima re do it with color tonight
VEMSONE
skina, the second throw is the best, the other two have wide spread legs, and suck. exactly like prostitutes. if you wouldn't want your throws to be prostitutes you'd do like the second flick and close those spaces up
bump that ewal, only clean shit on this page.
vems work on ur tag nd the e hole looks odd. the v would look more soilid if the left arm was a solid line instead of the lil curves.
seyr? keep practicing that throw, looks solid.
skina that shitty generic style is played out. give crits nt pussy lips.
lol some one got mad
***** how do i post the same shit ?
and i havent been on this shit in over 2 months and you didnt even write that long ago gtf
and i feel you phat
SEVR or SEYR that e is nice and the Y the S is bad and R too try flowing them better with the other ones work on your tagg btw
lol some one got mad
***** how do i post the same shit ?
and i havent been on this shit in over 2 months and you didnt even write that long ago gtf
and i feel you phat
SEVR or SEYR that e is nice and the Y the S is bad and R too try flowing them better with the other ones work on your tagg btw
Crits yo!
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