work on that M the U is ight need to be cleaner try an upper case E and the S is ok
work on that M the U is ight need to be cleaner try an upper case E and the S is ok
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looks like FPD to me. The D doesn't seem to match the style of the other two letters. I suck at throws.... bad... but I suggest trying something more round... lowercase F and E maybe... might flow better for you.
i know it increases in size, i like it that way...all other crits welcome
Last edited by vems; 09-22-2011 at 10:33 PM.
VEMSONE
Thanks pete. I'm goin for a funky type of style so I'm not worried about flow yet till I get some solid letters to fuc with. Originally letter was gonna be separate from eachother but i thought it might be a dece toss.
And vems I think your V needs a little more structure, the M can lose the little notch on the far right, E could do with some negative space on the bottom half, and keep working on the S. ALso missed a little drop shadow on the s. Nice fill though, keep at it.
Last edited by Norfsuthr; 09-22-2011 at 06:55 PM.
that F is proper tho fed but i second wat pete said.
new v lmk what ya think
i love thisOriginally Posted by Norfsuthr
Khrits Pleez
atom:listen to the crits that people r telling u or their gonna stop given em...put a hole in the A and move that T over so it doesn't look like an r
just doodling crits
My bad sevr that's an older one; i haven't got many new ones
Last edited by Saiko; 09-22-2011 at 09:07 PM.
A's better but bring the T over so u can see where the horizontal bar hits the vertical bar on the left side like u can see on the right...is the top throw and the bottom one both done by u cuz the top ones defiantly better lol K's hurting a little though
is the a backwards on the top throw on purpose?
Yeah, the a looks really weird if i do it normally.
I did both, and k's are a whore to work with. I'm trying to work out another style for atom. The top one pry looks better cus i've been writing it longer.
I'll extend the top bar of the t and see what comes.
Thank you very much for the advice.
atom - I wouldn't extend the legs of the A and M like that. Try putting a hole in the O and see what it looks like. Also, the legs on the last one of the A don't look proportional, not because they're not the same length but because they're not the same width.
Sevr: I like both, but feel like the S on the first one doesn't fit. The rest of it I like a lot. On the second one I feel like the pointy bit at the top of the V should be on the other side to keep with the rest of the letters and put a space between the point on the R (which reminds me of flame boy from spitfire) giving it more balance. Looking good on both though. Maybe a face in the E on the first one.... it has a lip and mouth.... pierce his lip
Zest3: That SO is zest fully clean. well done.
here i re-did the outline to make the letters stand out better, and hopefully add some more structure to the v a bit, also added some more effects to the fill.
Last edited by vems; 09-23-2011 at 01:13 PM.
VEMSONE
vems: I dig it a lot. I like the lowercase E, but I think you could do a better one. knock out a few hallow E's.
thanks man, yeah this was the first of this style i threw up, ive evolved it a little bit over the past couple days, after i finish that sek throwback ill post up another throwie
VEMSONE
bump for more crits and less talk on this page.Crits yo!
I suggest filling up the gap on the M. The U, E, S all have the same flow the M does not.
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