its awful, try harder
its awful, try harder
I will. what is horrible is out of all my attempts over the years... mind you it's been many since I have tried... this is probly my best throw to date. I've never really much cared for them and have always been shit at them so I've never really given it much effort. Lately I've seen several that have given me motivation to build one of my own.
your comments
The HA connect looks pretty sick even though they aren't too proportional. Just seems to work here. I like the idea of the backwards P. Give your H a back to lean on, but I don't think you pulled it off well enough here. Mostly the indention in the top, I think. Just round it out. I'd avoid using a lowercase t in a throw. It's just a really awkward structure and I think a capital T would be more effective. The 2 isn't too bad.
PETER - study some throws homie. Thats lookin rough. And try just drawing simple shapes for a while like circles squares and triangles, but try to draw them proportionally and CLEAN. Maybe try to exhale as you move you hand. Try drawing with your elbow rather than your wrists. These may not necessarily work, but just try to find what works for you.
Peter- looks like you were having a heart attack while doing those lines. work on cleanliness. and the I looks like a C. maybe make them a lil talller
Phat2- idk how i feel about the backwards P. i usually like backwards letters but not feelin it as much on this one. not saying you cant make it look better. and the h looks a lil like an L. diggin that A. definitely make the T capital. maybe have the P bump out more at the top rather than sag down. idk
++++++SIR CREW++++++ sircrewgraffiti.blogspot.com
SantaIsReal
Eat poop all day
AHATZ thats what i read thereOriginally Posted by Phat 2
your comments
your other throws are betta
Took crits, need more.
ok looks the same,
youve posted 3 other thrwos and you havent changed anything. :/
Trying to get down one throw, not change it completely. So I'm taking the crits and applying it to the throw.
@syn Change it, try a new style cause that sure aint working
crits changed it a bit smaller gaps streched out letters i think its ight
Your N looks like an H an your A looks A LOT like an R.
Like if your user name wasn't skina I'd think that said skihr.
H,and R hmmmm
i dont see the R and i kinda see the H any more crits ?
For real, you don't see it?
The letters aren't bad, they just don't really look like the letters they are supposed to be
i see the N being and H but the A being an R not so much but ill fix it up a bitFor real, you don't see it?
The letters aren't bad, they just don't really look like the letters they are supposed to be
@ reach SHITS AWESOME but the P fix it up a bit AND BTW i finished the simple peice were should i post it up ?
Thinking about changing what I write to Scewt... the Y in Syn throws me off, and I just can't personally do much with it because I'ma failure.
Man, I think you should go with a different name.
When I think of the word scoot I think of a dog scooting across a carpet dragging his ass.
Lol, tbh, I just liked the way it rolled off the tongue. And plus, some of my friends called me Cooter Scooter for a while. I just like it.
are you sure they werent just calling you cooter? or pussy?
Posting Permissions
Reply With Quote
Bookmarks