Throwies

**smokeitup** · 10-17-2011 12:10 AM

look at this:

what do u think of SPIY?

**ZETA** · 10-17-2011 05:14 AM

@smoke, eh the greens a little weird and the pics are small and low quality so its hard to tell..

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**smokeitup** · 10-17-2011 05:30 AM

Originally Posted by ZETA

@smoke, eh the greens a little weird and the pics are small and low quality so its hard to tell..

u can click on the pics and it brings it up, there not mine its way too toy to be my throwies just seeing what people think of them...

**SynOne** · 10-17-2011 07:31 AM

It really looks like a P is an r. Just sayin.

Zeta - Digging it, I wouldn't have the diamond opening in the A. Just seems to off balance it. But some might like that.

**Strange Journeys** · 10-17-2011 12:08 PM

haha hope those arent yours smoke they suck

nice crotch zeta and put some fucking socks on man

**SynOne** · 10-17-2011 03:37 PM

^ Yeah, I thought the same as you. "Fuck the art, lets stare at his crotch."

Tried Defining the K. Re Crit this bitch.

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**tophaa** · 10-18-2011 12:08 AM

iToy but iTry, thought I would throw up some pics from a legal place to tag in the area. The last one says HKD, which is my groups name, I usually throw it but I was just messing around earlier. Didn't come out too great but alas... Feedback please

**verty** · 10-18-2011 04:38 AM

hey guys,
this is my first post on this forum...
ive been interested in Graffiti all my life, but latley have had the urge to draw/write some peices. Im by no means any good and give full respect to all the talented writes out there.
here are two throwups ive plotted on paper. Feedback would be great.

**ZETA** · 10-18-2011 10:49 AM

@strange, socks are for pussies who cant stand the "cold" of october... and yeah ya like that crotch?

**PETER** · 10-18-2011 02:27 PM

Vert: Your bottom one is smashing your top one, but they both need work. I suggest filling some of the space under the left side of your T on the bottom one. I am horrible at throws so I can't really expand on that, but the idea is for it to have style in quick and simple way. Troll around and keep rockin' the books... post as you progress to keep it moving.

**skinaone** · 10-18-2011 04:53 PM

Originally Posted by verty

hey guys,
this is my first post on this forum...
ive been interested in Graffiti all my life, but latley have had the urge to draw/write some peices. Im by no means any good and give full respect to all the talented writes out there.
here are two throwups ive plotted on paper. Feedback would be great.

ueot thats what ia see
V make the line go down more E is not flowing the the V same for the R and the T is like mad far away

**knowtheledge** · 10-18-2011 05:27 PM

havent posted here in a min..

**MyNipsAreHard** · 10-18-2011 05:41 PM

Knowledge- pretty good i just dont like all the bumps on the M and that does look like a K
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**tophaa** · 10-19-2011 01:19 AM

Can anyone give me feedback on mine?

**verty** · 10-19-2011 06:02 AM

Originally Posted by PETER

Vert: Your bottom one is smashing your top one, but they both need work. I suggest filling some of the space under the left side of your T on the bottom one. I am horrible at throws so I can't really expand on that, but the idea is for it to have style in quick and simple way. Troll around and keep rockin' the books... post as you progress to keep it moving.

Thanks for the tip Peter... ill work on filling in the T... ill keep posting as I progress

Originally Posted by skinaone

ueot thats what ia see
V make the line go down more E is not flowing the the V same for the R and the T is like mad far away

Thanks for the tip.. yeah I thought the V looked like a U as welll.. struggling getting bubble text with more definition I guess.. but will work on it.. Thanx

**PETER** · 10-19-2011 07:15 AM

Vert: I suggest dropping by the "New to Graffiti" thread and studying up there. Also look around and see how people construct their throws and basic letters.

**SneeZ** · 10-20-2011 09:15 AM

had to post this shit. gott's ta fix da N, bytchz!
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**ZETA** · 10-20-2011 11:05 AM

i like the tag. itd be hard to do fast, but its still nice. fits the style of the throw. and it all looks good but the N is lower case which is kinda eh... i personally like to keep the letters consistant

**knowtheledge** · 10-20-2011 11:40 AM

been so bored

**ceaze** · 10-20-2011 05:48 PM

sup fellas, hopeing i can get some crits...

muke- good shit, consistant, the onlything i would suggest is keeping the top of the bottom right leg of the K from connecting there in the middle, i feel thats very generic.
sneez- i like your style man, i actually dont mind the upper/lowercase mixture, i think it looks straight

heres a couple quickies i threw up for some crits.
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