and that was actually at RIB bein typee tough nuts knowin everything about everyone over there.
and that was actually at RIB bein typee tough nuts knowin everything about everyone over there.
SynOne- Thanks for the feedback, it's DAR you have any suggests on how to make the D look more like a "D", i've been having a hard time with it.
what are you saying? I dont even remember ever adressing you...Originally Posted by sir.to.you.
Vivid, PESOE said it all. Practice a shit ton. Research some throws. Gain some inspiration. Emulate then make your own.
SEOT- it has some potential, but you really need to work on your shapes. Keep hitting the books and clean your hand up. The bottom of the T is by far the worst part though. Consistency is key. And a thing to know about drop shadows is that should be the EXACT shape of your initial outline.No fatter, no longer, no wider. I still have a lot of trouble with this myself.
Last edited by Phat 2; 10-26-2011 at 06:29 PM.
Just started writing need help, any help will be appreciated.
Nouv, no doubt I'm a toy, but I sure read that as Klrus. Imo your A looks like a R. Even though that would be a kick ass R.
Dusk, I'm colorblind. So I can't see nothing but black with a few highlights and a red outline.
Syn, I'm still a toy too, but it's most definitely an A. In an R, the right side bend would bend in ABOVE that center line instead of below it. Thanks for the crit though.
Dusk - Work on keeping all of your letters consistent for now. Sketch on some graph paper to really see if you're keeping everything proportional. And remember, crawl before you walk.
Nouv, you're right. Now that I really look back at it. It does look like an A. Sick flow in it. Keep it up.
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@knowtheledge that new jedi shits tight right!
have the left side of the M be as high as the rest of the word, experiment some more with K's and E's and youre good
@sty fuck yea dude jmt fovever!
n thanks phat ima do dat
nouv I dig the the throw
dc skater and dusk stick to the books and research right now
muse - phat hit it on the head your m and e's need a little work.
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Muke - I agree with Phat, and try bringing the E up in line with the rest of the throw
Nouv - That shit looks straight to me, no crits...
Top - get those letters consistent as first then start playing with different sizes later
DC - I'd work with the RBK for right now, work on the lettering and not so much on the highlights and reflections
Dusk - Try keeping the letters balanced for right now, the D looks bottom left heavy, and the U looks bottom right heavy, the S looks right heavy and the K just has a big wart on the bottom.
Hip - The E's look too hidden and the S looks too squished in the middle, try giving equal space to each letter.
Muke- The M and the U aren't too bad. M actually has some style on it. I would shape it up a little better, but it's a good start. the K and E need some work for sure. And just your whole throw could be proportioned better. But keep at it, it has potential.
Pesoe - I have to agree your first E is hidden. Bring it out more. And I think the leaning style you have (and I have) looks better when each letter is aligned. Look at the size difference from your P and your last E. Use some graph paper to keep them all the same height. I used to have the same problem (and still get caught doing it a lot).
Dar- That's more of a straight letter. Try to do throws with minimal lines and in smooth motions (one smooth motion is optimal. My throws rarely have more than 3 lines per letter) Throws are meant to be done quickly. Research some throws and copy a few to get the jist of how to form some letters. Then base your letters off of that. But remember, don't bite, just draw influence.
trying new ish, used some racked excel paint with ny fats.. works alright but the paint is mad thin
and the second flick is garbage
first m is proper I personally dont dig the e still seems the middle of the e is being hidden or smashed ... but over all a nice toss
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Muke - The M looks a lot bigger than the other letters for some reason.
word thanks for the crits a few pages back. much appreciated!
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