still looks the same put more ephasis on the straight line in the b
I like it but I'd see about maybe making the top bar of the f a bit more pronounced and fucking around with the u's and c's some more
Never down with a star or any sort of hash mark or line for a hole in letters like o and p.
Yea my U's came out pretty bad, the C isnt quite right either. You're right about the F needing emphasis on the top cause mori thinks its a P haha.
And mori i feel you about the *, but if you don't like stars or lines what do you use for the holes? strictly dots or circles and faces?
I usually rock a hollowed out 'o' with a drop shadow in the open space. But don't get me wrong, its a personal pref. I can digg your style home boy. I just think * can be used as a cop out for a otherwise dope letter, ya know?
I havent been here for awhile.. but ive been still toy bombing. Any thoughts and feedback would be great
If I'm not mistaken I recall you.... and if my memory serves me right you've gotten better. Keep fuckin' with 3 and 4. Relax with some of the highlights it's a bit of an over kill. some of your stuff is a little wobbly and out of proportion.... like the R's in 2 and 3.
That 3rd one looks ok, not a throw but its good compared to your other shit. On the top 2 you're doing bubble styles for the ER but bar type ish on the VT, conform that shit. Look at some throws on flickr or something, usually they're 1 or 2 lines per letter, just go with that for now and keep the whole thing simple. btw I've only ever seen 3 guys who can rock a shine in their throws and not look like trash.
diggen them colors^ think you should work on the d' more tho
i think that this looks more on the piece side,becuz it took u awhile and it doesnt look very rushede,its pretty good very nice fill
Try to keep throwies simple. Practice some more, i liked your handstyle but this one isn't that good.
I will drop a throwie on this page when i'm at home.
I don't like my lines and outlines, it was -15 celcius outside.
But i'm new on this forum so you guys can see my style.
Crits are welcome
This one was a little better.
Crits are welcome.
Last edited by Trab; 02-10-2012 at 02:09 PM.