@ skate - B looks more like an E to me, and if youre really desperately hurting to do dollar signs and stars then do it, otherwise lose that. personally i like to see consistency in letter openings, so try doing all stars, or simple bars, or that spin thing from the R.
Props to Brains
“Always be yourself, express yourself, have faith in yourself, do not you go out and look for a successful personality an duplicate it.”
N in the first one has potential, the A also has potential. That K is awful.
Lose the shit around it, none of that outline shit, don't even worry about that shit yet.
Straight letters first, then when you've got straight letters down work on adding flares.
Also, there's a lot of people in here that have not improved at all since the last time I was on here...
Quickie i did in class today with sum sharpies . WSA (WEST SIDE ARTISTS)
That's more of a burner than a throwie, and that pic is far too small to actually give any critiques on. Nice bite on the Wu Tang "W" though.
Treat suckas like paint so call me turpentine; Removin motha-f**kas from the surface, and I'll rob your home land like the Mississippi purchase.........
dont go over your out lines , it makes them look scrappy
dam thats a quickie its freakin og
Crits please? New tag.. I need to fix my shading
Last edited by ZIK_ONER; 03-18-2012 at 07:15 AM.
JUST BOMB IT.
zik, try that shit in the middle of page
i know my shit go toy, hmu wit sum crits tho
We run from east side LB, all the way to west South Central
I'm much to toy to give you crits, all i can say is dope, I'll post up some new shit later
JUST BOMB IT.
lol mues that one was too far back^^ i didnt see it.
the bottom of the E is weird, and its really small. try making it bubbly for now and extend it
And the top of the S seems too low, maybe bump it up a bit. or maybe just bump up the piointy part at the top
The bottom of the U is going to the right...make it stay under the actual part of the U
thats all i can think of but it is still nice my man