don't write tak, people that are a lot better than you write it. however its not like you'll get up. sooo... and those aren't throws.
crits? I'm having a bitch of a time figuring out this M and my hand steadiness improves then turns to shit and so on and yea yaaa
^ tops ones better. Both M's are kinda big compared to other letters. I would shorten all the lines in the M.
I don't like the S in the second one as much as the first. The bottom right of the second M looks weird too
TAK. The second one gets way to thing. They aren't even throwups.
Just the letter combo tak sucks. T is a bitch and K is a hoe.
Last edited by Kushbombing; 04-26-2012 at 12:02 AM.
Been kinda fuckin' with this, still working on trying to turn it into a 4 letter one liner.
Wish my phone didn't take such retardedly large photos.
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one liners take years to master my advice is to focus on a basic throws... or cut out some of the lines like I did in the i to z to e connection in the throw below.
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Lol tak... TAKI 183, so dont write that. Kopr always looking good and dankbudz got some flava! I like the SE on the top one but you could use some tweaking with an M, definitely nice though
Heres my flood of leetzor throwz
I would have really liked the siren one if the S didnt make me want to puke
the gees and siren just need work on the s then they are solid. The hero is pretty cool
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Suggestions? Am I getting the right idea?
looks good as usual hipe.
SPY-you gotta find new letters man, u got 3 square ones and then one rounded one and ur F and T is really bad, T's in throwies should not be done in lower case unless you are a throwup king who can pull off nutty shit. keep practicing man we all start off at the bottom and work r way up, most of us at least. not saying im good, i still suck too. just keep at it.
zorak- u got ur letters in the same square genre which is good but it doesnt look all that nice just like everyone else starting out. I dont like how ur C is really top heavy and that it comes out more then bottom, just needs a one line and it would look like a lower case E. practice practice practice and you will progress.
These still suck and need lots of work but anyways, crits please.
just finished 2 designs which one is better?
1st is a block letter
2nd is somthing else
Optik : DMA
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back to painti after a year without, crits
pm if from the 613
Needed to waste what was left, quick 2 letter. K is messed
any crits on all the pics i post is welcome. I suck but still trying, got another throwie down
Mildstyle - Does it say NK? - its better than what i can do + its Dark red + black so its hard to tell for me :P
Zem - remove the outline around it remove them ring things and try pushing them a bit closer together and the middle line on the m move it a little bit
Cirtz Please + i know it not that good but its hard to get a r that i like :P