Mildstyle - Does it say NK? - its better than what i can do + its Dark red + black so its hard to tell for me :P
Zem - remove the outline around it remove them ring things and try pushing them a bit closer together and the middle line on the m move it a little bit
Cirtz Please + i know it not that good but its hard to get a r that i like :P
im jealous of your throw naked and hope and the other few who gots some guud shit!
Originally Posted by Mildstyles
Like the S Seldom just a suggestion make the hole in the s a bit smaller
^ i think its cool as is, got some funk
@ kase that shit aint workin, your trying to complicate it too much, cut back some yo
thanks for the crits journeys i appreciate it, is there any letters in particular that gotta go or should i jsut scratch the hole thing?
Dank i like your S the way it is, the middle part of it is my favorite part of it, maybe coule be abit smaller but the way it is looks good, maybe dont have ur L going up on such a sharp angle at the bottom but either way it looks good
Thanks dank, that 2 letter got some steez to it im lovin it. The S is sick and that L is much better than what i could do, looks nice
looks like a cool spot too
Last edited by Mildstyles; 04-27-2012 at 05:39 PM. Reason: the spot looked cool
Regardless of all of my posts, I do not do Graffiti and I also do not condone it, I take pictures of other people's graffiti.
Better pictures, fucked up my K.
Tak how long that take you man looks Nice just need to get better paint :P
What C looks better? 1 or 2
2nd C
@Kase, I think your S is the strongest of the letters you got,you got all the negative space between the letters thats got to go, the a is unreadable and the k has that weird kick on the bottom bar
yea norf it was a quick sloppy throw bur ill clean up them e's
And dank im jealous of your simps we are even
Only Fuck Fat Bitches Crew !!
crits?
Uhhh probably around 5 minutes, not sure haha.
And I like your first C more, it fits the R better
insted of saying i suck how about you tell me how to get better
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Axil, can you please just delete your sig. Until you stick with a name. THEN say "I write ____" or else change it to "Today I'm writing ____ but tomorrow I don't know what I'll write". Now regarding your throwie. Most importantly, make all the bars the same width. And on your R in the second one, don't put the right bar behind the left.
-just your average neighborhood Spiderman
im keeping this name until i get caught :P
Critz please!
Axil, Looks cool but the leg of the R could be a bit more fat. I'm not really the best to be giving critz, just trying to help.
Just started any critz would be much appreciated.
@ axil . i think the c is to squre .
throws should b made up of eather .simple bars . or half circles .
you should also be able to do each letter with out lifiting marker from page .
so to fix ur toss i would recomend making the top of the c and r the same shape . and the middle of the c more rounded because ur r is rounded . practice makes perfect . fill pages with small tosses an u will get it .
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the proportions could be better but what do ya think? critzz
dumb it down, hombre ^^
crits?
the 3rd one is the best but whats going on with the d it looks like a u?
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