Throwies

[H1P30N3R]

1000 at the very least
SOL thats a good base to work off of, youll change em up through time and itll progress.
And yeah chad+norf i mess around with capital a's but so far my lower case ones are better but im trying to get a capital A.
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word nice shit naked that james is dope that is my real name. Im gonna bite that shit n start writin james everywhere

[Wizard]

[H1P30N3R]

Bitin my avy smh lol ... anyway your on the right path but it isnt necessary to post every flick your draw draw about 300 post a pic draw another 300 post another flick .

[H1P30N3R]

took chad's advice cutting out crossing my lines so much... can i get som Big Krit's guys?

[Kaze]

yo im really diggin that K and R alot...especially the kicks u got on the right bottom legs. only thing i can really say is have the bump coming outa the back of ur K not go up so high...maybe drop it down a bit and try to give it abit of a inward angle....just slightly if u get wat im saying. overall i dig it alot

[ChadWarden]

now that looks better and you know it. that k's actually pretty fresh.

i feel like the p fucked you on this one. notice how much father down it goes than the o? and then you made the r the same size as the p, which would of been a good thing if the p wasnt bigger than the first two letters. one thing i like to do to keep my letter proportionate is to imagine a box around them. imagine a box aorund the k, then imagine one around the r, or at least the main of it. see the difference in size?





now that all being said, dont feel you need to always have your letters the same size, because you dont. plenty of cats have letters that vary in size and still look good. just that in this case, with the style you have, it doesnt.


theres also just something about that p, besides what i mentioned above, that just hurts the overall throw, i feel. dont know if you feel the same, but i recommend thinking up a new one. word.

[Saul Gud]

@hipe I think you should change the negative space inside the top of the P. I also agree with Kaze on changing the bulge on the back of the K somehow. But otherwise, looks hella dope. Like the matching K & R styles

[Mcnuggets]

crits

[BigFaggot]

hipe i think its the top of the P. its too pointed compared to the o and R looks nice though

[H1P30N3R]

thanks for all the crits guys I will work on the p the back of my k and letter size ... time to hit the lab lol

[Shit Outta Luck]

Naked two pages back..thanks for the Sol and that Q on the RESQ...mmm shit's delicious.

[Randy Lahey]

I'm going for a euro style, any pointers?
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[Kaze]

Euro style is the shit, i dont dig wat u did with ur top Y on the bottom of it..one liner idea is cool but it needs more work, try going a little bit more simple and let ur work develope naturally, i like the bottom one more K and L idea is pretty cool...keep workin on it

@MCNUGGETS look up some generic throwies and try some simpler letters, keep working at it dude

[aiko]

critz... idono about the P cause its such a long under bar

[GpersKreepers]

would you scribble the outline with a spray can too? then dont do it on paper, the V looks like a U and along with the P is too thin to try and make work with how your doing your AM, none of your letters are proply constructed,

[aiko]

i know its a bit sloppy, i was a bit drunk. i scribbled because all i had was a pen, i don't have to draw something perfectly, to know how i want to throw it up, its not like I'm copying it straight from my sketch book. thanks anyway though, ill keep working on it.

[H1P30N3R]

and don't use excuses that is lame. those are more suited for blackbook thread not throwish at all ... just take the crits from ppl with a good rep such as gpers learn develop more and keep it moving.

[MoganOne]

[TastyMcNasty]

mone, those are fresh.

boring weekend, decided to work on my throws more.

[Tempa]

^ nice


mine are crappy but o well haha